Zion

Adjectives can't cut it When you're gazing up in awe. Even photos don't do justice To describe what you just saw. The colors and formations - Different every way you turn - Are reminders that with travel, There is so much you can learn. I am humbled and I'm grateful That I've had the chance to visit All the beauty that is Zion - (Here's my adjective) - exquisite!

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Wilma Neels

Date: 4/12/2015 10:26:00 AM

Ilene, you made me curious to know more about this place. This is a beauty ;) hugs Wilma

Trevor Mcleod

Date: 4/10/2015 1:42:00 PM

Perfect! Travel agents should link to you.

Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/10/2015 6:45:00 PM

Ha! Thank you, Trevor! What a nice compliment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:42:00 PM

Ilene, I am dying to know what sent you to Utah! soupmail me, will you? I am just north of Provo. Sure hope you will give me a call if you ever make a trip north. I rarely get that far south where you are. Would love to see you. please soupmail me!

Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/10/2015 6:44:00 PM

I finally figured out how to send Soupmail using my phone so I did write to you...

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2015 6:16:00 PM

you have painted a brilliant image in my mind of the most beautiful place in the world:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/10/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thanks, Jan! It is just too beautiful for words.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/9/2015 12:16:00 PM

:) I love the hymn...We're Marching To Zion...beautiful beautiful Zion, We're marching upward to Zion that beautiful city of God. This is a lovely piece, my dear. There is much in Judaism that appeals to me. I'm glad you saw what thrilled your heart. Hugs

Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/10/2015 6:41:00 PM

Hey Eileen! The Zion I was referring to is a national park in Utah - it doesn't have anything to do with Judaism and I'm not familiar with the hymn. Still, I appreciate you reading and commenting, as always.