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Zinnia

Zinnia…garland of evening; I yield to such innocent blush; xanthic as your moonlight’s hue winging along the field’s minty air-- vulnerable are those eyes that can unleash a charm seen only by a few. Time and again, a mild gloss shimmers on your curved outline releasing petal drops ever quietly : crepe tassels bobbing to peep among embroidered leaves offering sweet incense for nightfall’s prints etched unto meadows, wafting with tuneful lilts of stems bathed in dew. Oh, you kindle a twirl with floral sisters jigging daintily as if to pull me closer in a prance; the one I dream about high on a wood’s lucent trail. Gently, my arms swing around, back and forth until I lay on your zinnia confetti embracing my tingled flesh, limbs, deep within your moistened soil… oh how corollas glaze into my Asian sky, breathlessly dressed by night, leaves flickering as you wave goodbye when summer ends! ------------- First ever Z Y X contest Sponsor: john lawless 10/12/2015
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Roper Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, a 7!
A  Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Nette, Nice to see you on John's winning list. Congratulations on your win. ** Love SKAT
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:13 AM
A wonderful tribute to our lovely Zinnia, Nette, so well imaged through this difficult form! Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Congrats on superb win nette with this wonderful write!
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:21 AM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Tor Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 12:49 AM
nette nice win!!!!!!!
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:36 PM
We can always count on you to make it beautiful !! Even in a zyx contest!! Not easy to do!
Leiser Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Congrats, Nette, for your most excellent ZYX poem! Great job!
Lawless Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Nette, great job in form and substance. Centering this poem made the contrived alphabetical constraints invisible. After reading all these poems and trying to sort them out....I came back to this one to rest. Thank you for participating in the contest.
Godwin Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Great job, Nette! I wanted to lay down in the picture you painted and linger there. I would not want to judge this contest ... CayCay
La France Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Nette, this is so lovely and charming, I love it 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, creepy cat ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 7:49 AM
The beauty of your poem has eclipsed that of the flower's my dear nette! A seven!
Muideen Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 7:45 AM
A beautiful imagery your write depicted friend. A well and an excellent write...........A.M.
Vaso Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Such an enchanting poem, I simply adored this!
Tor Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Love the imagery nette. A winning entry.
Dunn Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Simply elegant my young friend what a pleasure to read, enjoyed the vision of nature in all it's perfection through these beautiful lines of yours, a seven for sure, loved it totally, and thanks for your comment today, I thank you very much my dear others have not been so kind, but that is there problem not mine, if you know what I mean, I gave them the chose to read my poems today or not to, but enough of that I just wanted to tell you thank you straight from the bottom of my heart, thanks, cd
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Gorgeous tribute to this flower. sure looks like sunflowers! It's a very sunny poem as well.
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:56 PM
absolutely delightful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Paras Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Zinnia's blush is marvelous. But,ahhh ,the imagery topped it all. It doesn`t get more creative than that!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:40 PM
This poem is magnificent! You make this form seem easy, yet it is anything but! The easy flow of your words intoxicates the senses Nette. I know I will be seeing this beautiful piece at the top of the winner's list. #7
Datu Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Wham! The opening up to the end line grabbed me.Lovely and classic for one with a deep soul. I applaud you, flower lady!
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Good one..Great flow..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I had to do some research to do my work but I am familiar with a large number of plants but not nearly as large a number as some other people..The varieties are limitless..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:59 PM
- You make it sound like sweet kisses ...... beautiful written Nette :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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