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Zikr Aur Yaad

Mehfil me tera zikr hua,
dil me mayusi chha gayi,
shaam dhalte dhalte fir,
ek dafe teri yaad aa gayi......'agni'kosh

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 1/24/2017 3:27:00 AM

How romantic...kya khub kaha hein apne. :)

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 1/24/2017 10:43:00 AM

Shukriya... :)

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2016 9:25:00 AM

I bet this is nice in English. Skat

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 7/1/2016 9:53:00 AM

Thank u...:)

Aashu Giri

Date: 7/1/2016 4:47:00 AM

nice lines

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 7/1/2016 5:24:00 AM

Thank u Aashu...:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 9:34:00 PM

Vivek, i bet this poem is awesome...linda

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 6/24/2016 5:01:00 AM

Thnk u Linda......:)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/21/2016 1:09:00 AM

Hi, Although, I cannot understand your language, the form you selected is not Ghazal......

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 6/23/2016 3:29:00 AM

I'll give it a try for sure....:)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2016 5:22:00 PM

Do an English ghazal and let me know.... your friend Pashang

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 6/22/2016 5:47:00 AM

Thank you Mr Pashang, Actually i ve written the full Ghazal but submitted only a single couplet....that is why I chose the form "Ghazal"...since I am new to Poetrysoup...it'll take time to get friendly with it...Seeking your guidance in future as well. Rgrds:

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2016 2:00:00 AM

Hi, You mentioned that you submit a couplet, therefore that is not ghazal. Ghazal is a smaller version of qasida (qasida may reach to hundreds of couplets). While qasida is long, ghazal must be between 5-15 couplets. The Poetry soup has a great example for ghazal.... I have few ghazals, you're welcome to check them out.. Pashang

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 6/21/2016 4:38:00 AM

Here are some of the links for your kind reference... http://poetry.about.com/od/poeticforms/g/ghazal.htm https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghazal If u still think its not a ghazal....kindly explain and guide to me...i shall be grateful. Thanks & rgrds

Vivek Agnihotri
Date: 6/21/2016 4:30:00 AM

The language is hindi cum urdu...."The Ghazal is a poetic form consisting of rhyming couplets and a refrain, with each line sharing the same meter. A ghazal may be understood as a poetic expression of both the pain of loss or separation and the beauty of love in spite of that pain. The form is ancient, originating in Arabic poetry in Arabia long before the birth of Islam.(Wikipedia)".....This is very much a Ghazal.....I submitted only a couplet of Ghazal not the entire work.

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