Zikr Aur Yaad

Mehfil me tera zikr hua,
dil me mayusi chha gayi,
shaam dhalte dhalte fir,
ek dafe teri yaad aa gayi......'agni'kosh
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 3:27 AM
How romantic...kya khub kaha hein apne. :)
Agnihotri Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Shukriya... :)
A  Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:25 AM
I bet this is nice in English. Skat
Agnihotri Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Thank u...:)
Giri Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 4:47 AM
nice lines
Agnihotri Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Thank u Aashu...:)
A   Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Vivek, i bet this poem is awesome...linda
Agnihotri Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Thnk u Linda......:)
Salehi Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Hi, Although, I cannot understand your language, the form you selected is not Ghazal......
Agnihotri Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 3:29 AM
I'll give it a try for sure....:)
Salehi Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Do an English ghazal and let me know.... your friend Pashang
Agnihotri Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:47 AM
Thank you Mr Pashang, Actually i ve written the full Ghazal but submitted only a single couplet....that is why I chose the form "Ghazal"...since I am new to Poetrysoup...it'll take time to get friendly with it...Seeking your guidance in future as well. Rgrds:
Salehi Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Hi, You mentioned that you submit a couplet, therefore that is not ghazal. Ghazal is a smaller version of qasida (qasida may reach to hundreds of couplets). While qasida is long, ghazal must be between 5-15 couplets. The Poetry soup has a great example for ghazal.... I have few ghazals, you're welcome to check them out.. Pashang
Agnihotri Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Here are some of the links for your kind reference... http://poetry.about.com/od/poeticforms/g/ghazal.htm https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghazal If u still think its not a ghazal....kindly explain and guide to me...i shall be grateful. Thanks & rgrds
Agnihotri Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 4:30 AM
The language is hindi cum urdu...."The Ghazal is a poetic form consisting of rhyming couplets and a refrain, with each line sharing the same meter. A ghazal may be understood as a poetic expression of both the pain of loss or separation and the beauty of love in spite of that pain. The form is ancient, originating in Arabic poetry in Arabia long before the birth of Islam.(Wikipedia)".....This is very much a Ghazal.....I submitted only a couplet of Ghazal not the entire work.
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