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Zigzag Road

The road to true love couldn't be more crooked. It's tough to navigate. The forks do get rough and wicked; They're never straight. Some are hit with tsunami of heartbreak And pain along the way, Yet try again despite the ache Without delay. Is the zigzag journey to love worth it? You bet your life it is! If it's love that you seek, don't quit! Risk it, gee-whiz... Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Syllables checked at HMS Date written: 12/27/2022

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Date: 1/24/2023 7:52:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, nice poem, well done, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/24/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/18/2023 12:56:00 PM
Creative way to go with this challenge. Congratulations on your winner. Sara.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2023 1:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 12/29/2022 4:05:00 PM
A zig-zag for amor, que viva! Gee whiz...great doowop too! I see the zig-zagging in the poem. ~/B0L Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/29/2022 7:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anaya:-) God bless.
Date: 12/29/2022 12:36:00 AM
So true a reminder that love is a zigzag journey.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/29/2022 10:29:00 AM
Indeed it is! Thanks for the lovely visit, Linda:-)
Date: 12/27/2022 11:38:00 AM
A wonderful write and so true. Love your ending. Good Luck Have a blessed New Year 2023.............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/27/2022 12:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-) A blessed New Year to you, too!

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