Zhi Nu and Niu Lang

Here is the love story of Zhi Nu and Niu Lang
A romantic ancient Chinese tale of very long 
Zhi was a nymph and Niu Lang was a cowherd
Cowherd-nymph love forbidden,secretly wedded.

Had two children, but their happy life ended.
As by the goddess Wang  they were detected.
The goddess took Zhi Nu back to the heaven 
Niu Lang chased them with his two children.

They were blocked by the milky way- sky river
And the children kept crying for their mother,
Shouting her name, Niu and children wandered
By their pain and grief, the goddess was moved.

She allowed them to meet one day in a year
Could be seen in the sky as Altair and Vega stars
They meet and live happily ever after for a day.
Day celebrated as Qixi- Chinese valentine day.

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** A Chinese love story
August 3, 2014
Form: Rhyme
Dr. Ram Mehta
Ninth Place Win
Contest: A True Love-Poem by P.D.
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Deschler Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:57 PM
This is a really beautiful story of true love. Very nicely written, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 2:24 AM
Hi dr Ram, loved it xx
Smith Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:33 PM
what a lovely story...congrats Tim
M V Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Beautifully presented Zhi Nu and Niu Lang. Congratulations, my poet friend
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:12 AM
A very emotional voice I hear in these verses. Congrats for your win Dr. Ram Mehta!
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:55 PM
What a lovely tale, congrats....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:03 PM
you know so many beautiful stories based on mythology. . It is nice you can bring them into poetry. Congrats for your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 12:25 PM
An amazing unique work Dr Ram! Congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome win. A wonderful and sweet poem, True Love, it is!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Enjoy my blog "I'm Standing Behind You" if you like or have the time. Enjoy the coming week. LOVE LINDA
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:43 AM
This is a really cool piece. I enjoy poems that include mythological references since I often employ Greek mythology in my pieces. Great work, Doc! :) ~JTAP
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Dr Ram I like this a lot, I have just finished reading ' Bound Feet and Western Dress' I can recommend it as another Chinese love story....David
Horsman Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Oh and a poem, where one wishes would just go on and on, love the change of culture too, Dr, good luck in contest...
Gorelick Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 10:31 AM
NO fair! Now your going to win! Seriously, this is charming. BG
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