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Zhi Nu and Niu Lang

Here is the love story of Zhi Nu and Niu Lang A romantic ancient Chinese tale of very long Zhi was a nymph and Niu Lang was a cowherd Cowherd-nymph love forbidden,secretly wedded. Had two children, but their happy life ended. As by the goddess Wang they were detected. The goddess took Zhi Nu back to the heaven Niu Lang chased them with his two children. They were blocked by the milky way- sky river And the children kept crying for their mother, Shouting her name, Niu and children wandered By their pain and grief, the goddess was moved. She allowed them to meet one day in a year Could be seen in the sky as Altair and Vega stars They meet and live happily ever after for a day. Day celebrated as Qixi- Chinese valentine day. +++++++ ** A Chinese love story August 3, 2014 Form: Rhyme Dr. Ram Mehta Ninth Place Win Contest: A True Love-Poem by P.D.

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Date: 9/3/2014 8:57:00 PM
This is a really beautiful story of true love. Very nicely written, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/1/2014 2:24:00 AM
Hi dr Ram, loved it xx
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:33:00 PM
what a lovely story...congrats Tim
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Date: 8/30/2014 10:05:00 AM
Beautifully presented Zhi Nu and Niu Lang. Congratulations, my poet friend
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:12:00 AM
A very emotional voice I hear in these verses. Congrats for your win Dr. Ram Mehta!
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:55:00 PM
What a lovely tale, congrats....Seren
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:03:00 PM
you know so many beautiful stories based on mythology. . It is nice you can bring them into poetry. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/29/2014 12:25:00 PM
An amazing unique work Dr Ram! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:30:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome win. A wonderful and sweet poem, True Love, it is!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Enjoy my blog "I'm Standing Behind You" if you like or have the time. Enjoy the coming week. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:43:00 AM
This is a really cool piece. I enjoy poems that include mythological references since I often employ Greek mythology in my pieces. Great work, Doc! :) ~JTAP
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Date: 8/4/2014 3:26:00 PM
Dr Ram I like this a lot, I have just finished reading ' Bound Feet and Western Dress' I can recommend it as another Chinese love story....David
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Date: 8/4/2014 11:09:00 AM
Oh and a poem, where one wishes would just go on and on, love the change of culture too, Dr, good luck in contest...
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Date: 8/3/2014 10:31:00 AM
NO fair! Now your going to win! Seriously, this is charming. BG
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