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These lines are not billable. Here's the statement for zero. Though there're seven syllables I'm no great poet hero. Zero not so fillable Compounding it won't rhyme. Though seeds planted tillable And a poet's soul are these lines
A new form: Ae Freislighe Poetry Form Written: 5/12/2023 Contest: Writing Challenge-Z Words Sponsor: Constance La France 7 syllables per line rhymes line 1 and 3 3 syllable rhyme rhymes line 2 and 4 2 syllable rhyme I found another explanation of this form and I have made a mistake in the form. The first three syllables are called a dunadh and are repeated as the last three syllables of the last line. Sorry, I don't know if I can change it now. What is here now is the one with changes.

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Date: 5/16/2023 5:36:00 AM
Very creative, Sara. "Zero not so fillable." True. A definite challenge in rhyme and in life. Congratulations on your win! Brian
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for the creative part, Brian. Your visit with congrats is so uplifting. Sara
Date: 5/15/2023 4:58:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, such an interesting form, congratulations !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. I was greatly challenged plus put to shame by this form. LOL..Sara
Date: 5/14/2023 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 2:26:00 AM
Why, thank you for the congratulations, Alfonso. Sara
Date: 5/14/2023 8:19:00 AM
Interesting form Sara. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/14/2023 3:00:00 PM
Why, thank you, Linda..I hope you try it. Sara
Date: 5/14/2023 7:07:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on winning the contest with your excellent poetry.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/14/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 5/13/2023 8:29:00 AM
Uplifting voice to your poem my friend. Great vibes throughout, good luck with the contest, and thanks for introducing this fine form.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/13/2023 8:56:00 AM
Lasaad, thank you for dropping by. I hope you can do one or two or three. I am having a harder and harder time each time. I need to rest from it for a while. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

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