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Zen Garden

Around beguiling courtyard dwell elegant flowers growing hither in joyous kindred loveliness moreover newly opened peonies quietly ripple softly to ubiquitous veritable winds xenial, yet zen. 11/7/2021

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Date: 12/6/2021 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Zen Garden" sounds wonderful. A book with tea would be great. Have a great/blessed day................................
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/6/2021 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Date: 11/19/2021 6:25:00 AM
Lovely, Laura! Congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 11/18/2021 12:00:00 PM
Beautifully written Laura, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I hope you are feeling better! :)
Date: 11/18/2021 9:57:00 AM
Laura, this is definitely "zen" so beautifully expressed in soft tones of serenity. Congratulations on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Date: 11/17/2021 3:50:00 PM
Excellent Laura, good luck in the contest. A poet friend and follower, Bill
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! :)
Date: 11/16/2021 3:56:00 PM
this ended up being a real GEM. Congrats to you
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I’m glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Date: 11/16/2021 3:05:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, Ann! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 11:33:00 PM
This is wonderful work. Congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 9:44:00 PM
One can almost inhale the sweet fragrance. Very nice and well deserved win. Peter
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Peter! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 9:39:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually behold your garden. God bless you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Beata! I thank God for your sweet witness here at PS! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 8:25:00 PM
Your zen garden is so graceful and soothing, a truly meditative feel, and the flow of words feels so natural it doesn't seem to be contrived - congratulations on your win~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! Glad you liked this! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 4:53:00 PM
Fantastic, Laura! Yours resemble a large jigsaw puzzle in preschool ... perfect easy fit's! I learned sensical decades later! My compliments on your placement in my contest, Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, William! It was a fun form to try, and I enjoyed reading the many creative entries in this form! :)
Date: 11/15/2021 4:47:00 PM
A clever win, Laura. Congrats. Terry
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 5:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry! :)
Date: 11/13/2021 8:19:00 AM
I give you a big round of applause, Laura!! I love this 1 word per letter form which you used, and it is written with sense and apparent ease, too. ~ Best regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2021 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Paul! I’m so glad you liked it! :)
Date: 11/12/2021 10:33:00 PM
This is beautiful, Laura:) it's gonna be difficult judging this contest, given the number of quality poetry:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2021 9:20:00 AM
Thanks, Jo! I commented on your excellent Abecedarian poem, as well. It’s a fun, challenging form, although this came quickly to me. Good luck! :)
Date: 11/8/2021 10:34:00 AM
Clever girl! Good luck! Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/8/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rico! Happy you liked this one! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/8/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rico! Happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 11/8/2021 9:28:00 AM
I believe this entry is worthy to be among the best entered, Laura. My well wishes are with you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/8/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna! I’m glad you liked this! It kinda came to me quickly, so I’m glad it makes sense! :)
Date: 11/8/2021 1:44:00 AM
Great poem Laura. You used the alphabet well.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Date: 11/7/2021 9:07:00 PM
Well done!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! :)