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Poetic Form: Choka
Inspired: 2024 April 27
Image: Zero Hour Clock by Pinterest
the wind blows again
old times it blew and it stayed
you can see mountains clearly
days we looked for them
ah to be and not to be
see the mountains, not the wind
I am out of place.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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