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Poetic Form: Choka
Inspired: 2024 April 27
Image: Zero Hour Clock by Pinterest

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the wind blows again old times it blew and it stayed you can see mountains clearly days we looked for them ah to be and not to be see the mountains, not the wind I am out of place.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/28/2024 4:15:00 PM

loved this poem...there's joy in 'to be and not to be' When a person falls into that category of understanding, s/he is most certainly out of place. I live that daily :-)

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/28/2024 5:38:00 PM

We'd start a Book Club, hold a dance marathon fundraiser, your dance card be full for the night, and mines be the first to hear, "You've never danced in your life before?" Watch the backside knowing my trophies will never be seen, and you're one to say. Aloha, Sara--my thanks.