Zapped

electric                                 storm
.   energized                     stirred
.      einstein                deliberations
.          brain               on fire
.                    ZAPPED
.               idea          fizzled
.     weakened              fried
.   haphazard                  maze
. mousetrap                   no cheese

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John Anderson

August 3, 2026 at 6:04 PM

Hi, Congratulations 👍 with your place in the Criss-Cross Pivot Contest. You did a wonderful job with the complex layout AND with the concept gathering down to the PIVOT and then expanding out with a changed perspective. Note: You can use 2-3 words on either side rather than a single one. If you are interested in continuing with this layout and perspective - send me a soup mail and I will provide a link in return post to a python tool that does 90% of the layout for you. Have Fun! Cheers!