Ywte

Her plumage allures
Curvaceous in her wiggle
Like a duck waddles
In trance I am, captured so
She in view, I follow true










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April 9, 2011 at 12:32 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. The title caught my attention--an asset for any poem. Thank you for making me smile today and for your kind comment. Karen

C.C Bloomsfield

April 9, 2011 at 10:19 AM

i wonder what inspired this poem :),it made me chuckle,cute and sweet!Quack Quack >@ :>

Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2011 at 10:02 AM

I've never seen a YWTE, James, but had a chuckle at your response to hher "waddle." Humor and a touch of romance make for a nice combination in this delightful tanka! Love, Carolyn