Yujo

On awakening
I discover you have left 
Without a goodbye...                 
Or even shutting my door    
Now open to the whole world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Chiri Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:46 AM
John my dear John! Love your newest work here! I have been lax in my reading but I am remedying that now!:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Wow, this poem carries with it such an impact on the heart John! Brilliantly penned heartbreak. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Hello John I left a comment of what you said On the poem The Watchman. A person should alwasy say goodbye when they leave. Leaving the door open was the wrong thing to do. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
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