Yujo

On awakening I discover you have left Without a goodbye... Or even shutting my door Now open to the whole world.

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/20/2020 5:46:00 AM

John my dear John! Love your newest work here! I have been lax in my reading but I am remedying that now!:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2020 3:17:00 PM

Wow, this poem carries with it such an impact on the heart John! Brilliantly penned heartbreak. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/15/2020 5:39:00 PM

Hello John I left a comment of what you said On the poem The Watchman. A person should alwasy say goodbye when they leave. Leaving the door open was the wrong thing to do. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.