Janice Canerdy Poet Quatrain

Yuck--But I Love the Kid

It seems at least one dorm room is the dwelling of a bum.
		I visited my son and saw big piles of grungy clothes.
                leftover fast food, open garbage--things a mother loathes!
		Sloppy sons so seldom seek to scour sickening scum.

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Teddy Kimathi December 23, 2015 at 2:29 AM Hahahaha. Your poem reminds me when I was in high school. Congrats for your WIN Janice! ;-) Janice Canerdy December 23, 2015 at 8:14 AM Thanks, Teddy. I'm glad you liked it! Janice

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:12 AM Brilliant take Janice n a great win.. big congrats! Janice Canerdy December 22, 2015 at 8:36 AM Thanks so much, Upma. Merry Christmas! Janice

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 9:41 AM The topic might be Yuck, Janice, but the content of this entry is capably done:) A worthy winner it is...congratulations:) // paul Janice Canerdy December 21, 2015 at 11:35 AM Paul, thank you SO much for your kind words! Janice

Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 7:12 AM Loved this Janice! Congratulations on this win! Janice Canerdy December 21, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thank you, Michael. Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:36 PM this one was VERY good. Congrats. It was written very cleverly. Janice Canerdy December 20, 2015 at 7:53 PM Thank you, Andrea. Yours was great! Janice

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:53 PM janice, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Janice Canerdy December 20, 2015 at 7:22 PM Thank you so much, Linda. Janice

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:41 AM JANICE, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Janice Canerdy December 20, 2015 at 1:10 PM Thank so much, SKAT! Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 3:47 PM this set is EXCELLENT. I see a big win in its future!! Janice Canerdy December 18, 2015 at 3:51 PM I hope so! Thanks, Andrea. Janice