Black Eyed Susan Poet Limerick

Yuck

When Mother Eagle returned with her wormy swag
Each of the eaglets grimaced and gagged
"Eat that slimy thing?
You've got to be kidding!
We'll wait and see what Dad bagged!"


7/29/11

Received 6th place in "Pure Thoughts on Nature" contest

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Lisa Cooper August 13, 2011 at 8:42 AM lol another funny love your sense of humor

James Fraser August 11, 2011 at 3:04 PM Made me chuckle Susan with this koolio Limerick, nice one, and many congratulations on your win :)

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2011 at 7:08 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure August 4, 2011 at 10:11 PM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!

John Freeman August 4, 2011 at 1:43 PM As humans feed for sure Susan. Smile! Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball August 4, 2011 at 12:38 PM hahaha Loved this. The ungrateful, spoiled, thankless little bratletts. What will they do if Dad eats it all,, And brings nothing back for the eaglets. God job my friend, Congrats on the contest. God Bless, JB

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 7:34 PM Congrats Susan on a super win with this witty piece of poetry luv..enjoy...

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 7:03 PM smart one,susan...cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!

Sara Kendrick August 3, 2011 at 7:32 AM Cute..Enjoyed with a chuckle..Good luck in John's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 12:44 AM glad you went the funny route with yours too. I really like yours, Susan. Hope it does great in the contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 2, 2011 at 4:08 PM haha, yup, hopefully Daddy Eagle had something better :) cute limerick, Susan, enjoyed this one, and thank you for your wonderful comments in my collab with Chris, that was fun to write :)

Jack Horne August 2, 2011 at 9:46 AM LOL, that's two good laughs I've had today, thanks to you : )

Steven Cooke August 1, 2011 at 5:29 PM so true in life, love the humour here good write.