Jadazzle United Poet Lyric

You'Ve Changed My Life Completely

You’ve changed my life completely
Can’t bear it when we‘re apart
For every waking moment
You are forever in my heart

I can’t stop smiling when I think of you
Love everything you say and do
Can’t wait until there comes a time
When I know you’re truly mine

A word from you and I'm wearing a silly grin 
You're the cream in my coffee, the sugar in my tea
I feel I can face the challenges of life and always win
You have become the missing part of me 

Because of you I now feel whole
My heart is full and at last I'm content
I feel your warmth in the depths of my soul
Every second with you is a second well spent

Just a smile from you and my heart skips a beat
With you in my life I am fully complete
We have our whole life ahead to share
You’re the love of my life no other can compare 

A million beautiful butterflies landed on us as we slept
They carry us to paradise where loving souls are kept 
Here we're given holy blessing for the relationship we share
The angels smile in heaven when true love is in the air

Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson
11th July 2014

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James Horn September 20, 2015 at 4:11 AM Jan, Aha. Another Horn making a comment. Needed this to rejuvenate me this AM. Jim Horn

Wendy Rycroft August 31, 2015 at 4:25 PM Very lovely x Wendy Jan Allison September 1, 2015 at 6:34 PM Its a very special poem to our both Wendy and after a year we are writing together again which really is a dream come true:-) hugs jan xx

Bhavna Khemlani November 7, 2014 at 8:40 AM How cool! Congrats. It's amazing how someone or a moment can change one's life and it reflects through poems. Regards, Bhavna Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 7:45 AM Thanks for dropping by Bhavna - I find it hard to even log on to jadazzle united as Darren is not well and we have not written together for quite a while - I think this is the last poem we wrote together and it really is a very special poem to us both:-) Hugs Jan x

Ken Carroll July 18, 2014 at 5:11 PM Lovely romantic write and collaboration! Jadazzle United July 18, 2014 at 6:38 PM Thanks Ken I am the luckiest lady in the world to have such a wonderful writing partner as I do with Darren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne July 18, 2014 at 2:48 PM awww, what a beautiful write - great that you guys are so happy together Jadazzle United July 18, 2014 at 4:50 PM Thanks Jack writing with Darren means the world to me he is the most fabulous friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith July 17, 2014 at 2:25 PM Love the whole poem, but the first two lines of the last stanza.. Absolutely brilliant!!! ... Hugs.. Arlene Jadazzle United July 17, 2014 at 2:56 PM Its the first lyric Darren and I have written together so it is a very special poem to us both:-) So glad you enjoyed it Hugs Jan xx

Lucilla Carrillo July 14, 2014 at 10:44 AM I love this poem very much - the cream in my coffee and sugar in my tea. I will remember those words forever. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Jadazzle United July 14, 2014 at 10:50 AM Oh Thank you Lucilla that is a lovely comment my friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 13, 2014 at 6:04 PM reminds me a little of the great Dave Matthews, "Spoon in Spoon, stir in my coffee" Jadazzle United July 14, 2014 at 12:53 AM Thank you so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Shi July 13, 2014 at 4:02 PM Wow simple beautiful Jadazzle United July 13, 2014 at 5:15 PM thank you so much for the lovely comment Poet Shi. Hugs Jan xx

David Williams July 13, 2014 at 3:56 PM Jan I like....David Jadazzle United July 13, 2014 at 5:14 PM Thanks David we had fun writing it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud July 13, 2014 at 2:42 PM yeoww.. this blew me away; it just hit something special inside ... greeat collab from the both of you!.. huggs Jadazzle United July 13, 2014 at 3:06 PM WOW thanks Nette its our first attempt at a lyric and I am so so pleased with the result:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley July 12, 2014 at 12:14 PM A brilliant co-written piece. Loved the upbeat melody of it and it is an inspiring write! Congrats to both authors! BBBBBraVOOOOOOOO !!!!! Jadazzle United July 13, 2014 at 1:28 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Robert:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Regina Mcintosh July 12, 2014 at 10:27 AM Pretty. I enjoyed reading this one. Happy writing and God bless you both. Jadazzle United July 12, 2014 at 10:59 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment Regina. Hugs Jan xx

Robert Nehls July 12, 2014 at 5:31 AM Now that is a beautiful duet. Put a bridge or chorus to that one and you could have a hit song. People love the love songs, and this is the type of song that inspires young love and rekindles the old. Very well done. Totally enjoyed it... Robert. Think I'll put it in my Faves. Jadazzle United July 12, 2014 at 5:52 AM Wow Robert thank you so much for that lovely comment you have made my day:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance July 11, 2014 at 6:17 PM 7's and to fav's I love this!! and know word by word every feeling! Perfect poem, ! Jadazzle United July 12, 2014 at 2:24 AM Wow thanks Casarah. We so enjoyed writing this one:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith July 11, 2014 at 2:36 PM This is so romantic Jan...Can't tell who wrote what...It flows real well and has a good rhythm...hugs Tim Jadazzle United July 11, 2014 at 2:43 PM Brilliant Tim that is our intention am really pleased with the result too! Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop July 11, 2014 at 2:25 PM Its a wonderful lyric poem..Can I sing along?Just lovely ..both of you : ) Jan Allison July 11, 2014 at 2:28 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Charmaine - sing along! Think i will sing it in the bath lol :-) Hugs Han x

Eileen Manassian July 11, 2014 at 2:07 PM Ahhhhhh....romance! I'm captivated! hugs Jan Allison July 11, 2014 at 2:12 PM This is our first lyric Eileen i am really pleased with the result:-) Hugs Jan xxx