Muhammad Imtiaz Poet Couplet

Youth Is Treasure

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood
Let the new blood take the steer of the Master

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

water the body with the seeds of a character 
that stimulate the desire to achieve greator

Let your blood infused with the vibes of love
perfection of faith and wipe out hate….

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood
Let the new blood take the steer of the Master

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

Sprinkle my mind with the wine of divine
opening to me the secrets of life

high time is it to be the man of time
this time , you will never rewind

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood
Let the new blood take the steer of the Master

traditions of ages are victomized of changes
the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

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David Smith August 7, 2019 at 10:17 PM Very good write. We should never leave it too late to give youth a taste of responsibility if we want them to grow up wise. Regards David in NZ

Debbie Duncan March 13, 2018 at 9:27 PM Wisdom comes thru sages & ages :) You might like my The Girl And The Maze Keeper, or my first poem posted, or Sparkling Pebbles, Swept From The Sea, Or even Angel's Hope :) Muhammad Imtiaz March 14, 2018 at 1:19 AM Thanks Debbie I will check it....

Marc Acrich February 25, 2018 at 10:45 AM im sending you an email Muhammad Imtiaz February 25, 2018 at 11:15 AM ok Marc

Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2018 at 1:19 PM This piece is infused with wisdom Mohammad. Like you name this piece is worthy of praise. Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 1:29 PM Thanks a lot Richard ... Really appreciated for your kind and generous feedback.

Maria Williams February 24, 2018 at 3:55 AM "Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood Let the new blood take the steer of the Master". I love the way you have used this couplet through your very profound poem. It gives it so much more impact to the intensity of your words. Brilliant poem. I too shall add this very astute poem to my collection of faves..Maria Muhammad Imtiaz February 24, 2018 at 11:26 AM Hi Maria...I am so pleased to have such beautiful comments and adding in the favourite. Thanks a lot for your comments and help.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 11, 2018 at 1:37 PM This is rather prophetic. Very deep, profound and extremely well written. A lot of thought has been put into the words you have placed on this page. It hasn't gone unnoticed. I will add it to my favourites. Perhaps changes to traditions are required for the world - particularly, the youth of our world - to now survive... Muhammad Imtiaz February 11, 2018 at 11:58 PM Thanks Leanne.....i am extremely grateful for your sincere comments. and thankful that you go deep into the meaning . i agreed that the we need change in traditions..... thanks and have a blessed day...........

Susan Baquie February 4, 2018 at 5:14 PM I like the deep, thoughtful sincerity of this poem. It also has a musical quality in the repetition of a "chorus" - could become a song. Congratulations! Muhammad Imtiaz February 4, 2018 at 10:58 PM Thanks you Susan for your sincere and lovely comments. Really appreciated.

Becca Teagan January 18, 2018 at 8:55 PM "sprinkle my mind with the wine of divine, opening me to the secrets of life" wow, I want some! sounds like fun :) Nice interesting poem, Muhammad! Muhammad Imtiaz January 20, 2018 at 11:12 PM Thanks Becca.............It is some what philosophical...........if your mind is mixed with some wine that has qualities of purity ..,,...then of course it will do something great and achieve great...........you can have such wine free of cost........it is available for anyone looking for it

Joseph May November 22, 2017 at 5:26 AM Well expressed Muhammad...best wishes Muhammad Imtiaz November 22, 2017 at 5:37 AM Thanks Joseph........for your kind wishes