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Youth Is Treasure

traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood Let the new blood take the steer of the Master traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages water the body with the seeds of a character that stimulate the desire to achieve greator Let your blood infused with the vibes of love perfection of faith and wipe out hate…. traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood Let the new blood take the steer of the Master traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages Sprinkle my mind with the wine of divine opening to me the secrets of life high time is it to be the man of time this time , you will never rewind traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood Let the new blood take the steer of the Master traditions of ages are victomized of changes the sun of morning the harbinger of new-ages

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Date: 8/7/2019 10:17:00 PM
Very good write. We should never leave it too late to give youth a taste of responsibility if we want them to grow up wise. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/13/2018 9:27:00 PM
Wisdom comes thru sages & ages :) You might like my The Girl And The Maze Keeper, or my first poem posted, or Sparkling Pebbles, Swept From The Sea, Or even Angel's Hope :)
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/14/2018 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Debbie I will check it....
Date: 2/25/2018 10:45:00 AM
im sending you an email
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 11:15:00 AM
ok Marc
Date: 2/24/2018 1:19:00 PM
This piece is infused with wisdom Mohammad. Like you name this piece is worthy of praise.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:29:00 PM
Thanks a lot Richard ... Really appreciated for your kind and generous feedback.
Date: 2/24/2018 3:55:00 AM
"Isolate wisdom of truth from the slavery of falsehood Let the new blood take the steer of the Master". I love the way you have used this couplet through your very profound poem. It gives it so much more impact to the intensity of your words. Brilliant poem. I too shall add this very astute poem to my collection of faves..Maria
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 11:26:00 AM
Hi Maria...I am so pleased to have such beautiful comments and adding in the favourite. Thanks a lot for your comments and help.
Date: 2/11/2018 1:37:00 PM
This is rather prophetic. Very deep, profound and extremely well written. A lot of thought has been put into the words you have placed on this page. It hasn't gone unnoticed. I will add it to my favourites. Perhaps changes to traditions are required for the world - particularly, the youth of our world - to now survive...
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/11/2018 11:58:00 PM
Thanks Leanne.....i am extremely grateful for your sincere comments. and thankful that you go deep into the meaning . i agreed that the we need change in traditions..... thanks and have a blessed day...........
Date: 2/4/2018 5:14:00 PM
I like the deep, thoughtful sincerity of this poem. It also has a musical quality in the repetition of a "chorus" - could become a song. Congratulations!
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/4/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thanks you Susan for your sincere and lovely comments. Really appreciated.
Date: 1/18/2018 8:55:00 PM
"sprinkle my mind with the wine of divine, opening me to the secrets of life" wow, I want some! sounds like fun :) Nice interesting poem, Muhammad!
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 1/20/2018 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Becca.............It is some what philosophical...........if your mind is mixed with some wine that has qualities of purity ..,,...then of course it will do something great and achieve great...........you can have such wine free of cost........it is available for anyone looking for it
Date: 11/22/2017 5:26:00 AM
Well expressed Muhammad...best wishes
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/22/2017 5:37:00 AM
Thanks Joseph........for your kind wishes

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