Youth and Old Age

YOUTH AND OLD AGE


Get off your galloping horse of youth’s impressions 
Stop looking down upon old age with contempt
You are still on the planes of doubt and uncertainties
Having not yet made in life any real attempt.       

Not even a hill of problems have you ascended 
Neither have you faced a serious thunderstorm
How is it possible for you ever to be assuming  
Without experience your elders to reform? 

You better stop and think for a single moment  
All those whose heads have turned white or gray
How many hills of harm and mountains of troubles 
Have they been through and climbed to this day?  
 
Your youth, a spectacular time, for you to enjoy 
Dreams to make of what you would wish to assure      
Sadly though the future for you a possibility is only 
For everyone knows that nothing in life is for sure.       

So the preferable thing you ought to be doing
Is to listen carefully to these experienced old folks
For better, it is to learn from mistakes they made     
Than knowledge to gain from your very own faults! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
 30 NOVEMBER 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/25/2014 2:33:00 PM
Youth is truly wasted on the young- Lol -If only I knew then what I know now.. I so love your work Demetrios.
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:32:00 PM
Samuel Johnson wrote that " to have a good life when you are young realize that one day you wull be old. And when you are old remember that you were once young". Important message in you work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/6/2013 1:55:00 PM
Peace and Blessings to you my friend!
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Date: 12/6/2013 1:54:00 PM
If you get old! Old age is never certain for so many factors may be in the way! Thank you
Date: 12/5/2013 10:36:00 PM
Loved this very much Demetrios..at 54..I am now starting to look at the young with somewhat ..maybe compassion..knowing they will reach what I feel now...seems it happens overnight...maybe it's just me...:-) great poem..
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:34:00 AM
Donna, you just a...kid! Ha-ha! Well, I wish the young the best in life for they are the future of humanity BUT being young doesn't, unfortunately, guarantee old age! Thank you for visiting and commenting. You so gentle!
Date: 12/5/2013 6:24:00 PM
Excellent write, really enjoyed reading this, people can learn by reading your words.
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:35:00 AM
Vera, welcome to poetrysoup, I look forward reading your poems! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 12/5/2013 1:31:00 PM
Nice Work... You couldn't have said it better. I like this stanza: " stop and think for a single moment All those whose heads have turned white or gray How many hills of harms and mountains of troubles Have they been through and climbed to this day" Beautiful Poem!
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:37:00 AM
My dear, Christine, it is so wonderful to see you again. Thank you for your splendid post!
Date: 12/2/2013 1:54:00 PM
Great, great, great poem, Demetrios. This is a well-thought out quatrain! The subject of respect for the elderly is at the bottom of my heart! You've made me feel sprite! Friend, JM
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Date: 12/5/2013 10:07:00 AM
Thank you my good friend for your visit and comment! I was away because of internet problems!
Date: 11/30/2013 5:19:00 PM
very wise words Demetrios I enjoyed your thoughts in this pen well written Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow, for your heartfelt comment. I appreciate it!
Date: 11/30/2013 3:12:00 PM
I ever respect the silver haired wisdom of those older than I, my dear poet.....lovely lovely lovely poem...........
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:17:00 AM
My dearest , Eileen, what a pleasure it is to hear from you! Thank you so much for your warm comment!
Date: 11/30/2013 11:20:00 AM
your truth inspires, D.. sounding like gibran; impressed!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
I like him very much! When people speak the language of the heart they speak the same language regardless space and time! Thank you for your kindness!
Date: 11/30/2013 6:58:00 AM
It is always better to learn from other people's mistakes..It is a whole lot better than learning the hard way..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:48:00 AM
Yes, Sara, that is my point! Young people think they know but old people know that they know! Thank you for visiting!
Date: 11/30/2013 6:40:00 AM
- Wise words .... - When one becomes "older" ... more appreciative of the "little" things in life. - The days do not need a big "woooow" .... - Have a nice weekend, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise for your appreciation of my writing. Yes, things are as you say for we learn to value more the little things that in the final analysis are the spices of life! Have a great weekend!
Date: 11/30/2013 6:31:00 AM
You are a very wise man, do you mind if I look up to you to glean from your wisdom? This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:41:00 AM
Russell, my friend, it will be a great honor if my modest wisdom could be to you of any help! Thank you for your extraordinary comment! You so kind!
Date: 11/30/2013 5:50:00 AM
Indeed wise words from one of our young 'uns with all his faculties still keen. How lovely to see you writing in rhythmic and rhyming mode, gentle one. I'm faving your poem to read over and over again. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/30/2013 6:23:00 AM
Licia, thank you so much for the superb comment which I hardly deserve!
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