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Youth, Zeus’ thunderbolt of vitality, you are, The volcanic eruption of vigor, The very incarnation of liveliness, Your passion unrivaled Your spirit indubitable Your enthusiasm insurmountable On the horseback of your dreams you Are galloping Unafraid Uncompromising Unstoppable, to the ends Of the world, Overcoming every fear Demolishing every boundary Obliterating every division And Running always ahead-FREE- with a speed determined by Your eagerness to Do all To see all To know all To conquer all BUT You are not realizing that you, inadvertently, are Heading towards what you do not wish for, Something you so greatly despise, That your heart abhors and Your spirit dreads: OLD AGE However Do not… despair my young friends For The privilege of getting old, is something NOT bestowed on everyone! © Demetrios Trifiatis 22 FEBRUARY 2014

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Date: 3/1/2014 7:03:00 PM
Old age is a gift only for those who stopped to smell the roses. Outstanding gift dear Demetrios, a vivid depiction of youths 'race' towards old age. Tiaua.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2014 4:35:00 AM
Old age is a gift only for those who WISE have become, my dearest Tiaua, although it helps also those who stop in order to smell the roses! Thank you!
Date: 2/26/2014 4:32:00 PM
Hi; I agree with you 100% You are so right. The process of getting old is not for everyone. Old age is a gift that God don't give to everyone. Great wisdom here.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/24/2014 10:09:00 AM
Ensai toso Sophos....Wonderful...and this poem could have been written for me....Oh dear...too much to say here...A wonderful write, my dear. God bless.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/24/2014 10:29:00 AM
Yes, it could, since you are eternally young and creative! Thank you for your gracious comment!
Date: 2/23/2014 7:43:00 PM
I READ THIS ON THE RE-VERSE RADIO SHOW. IT SPARKED GREAT DISCUSSION. http://www.blogtalkradio.com/re-verse/2014/02/24/re-verse-classic-poetry-open-mic
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Date: 2/24/2014 5:49:00 AM
Dear Vicki it is really an honor to have read my poem on the radio! Thank you so much! How can I listen to it?
Date: 2/23/2014 1:47:00 PM
Demetrios I don't envy the youth of today...David
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:37:00 PM
David, my friend, thank you for visiting and commenting!
Date: 2/23/2014 10:22:00 AM
As long as we are healthy and can enjoy life it also comes to the point where what does age matter? There are younger people who can't you know? I so enjoy your visits, stop by again soon. Light & Love
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/23/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Debbie!
Date: 2/23/2014 9:33:00 AM
Excellent point you make! Too many die young! Yes, power corrupts as you pointed out in your comment. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:38:00 PM
Matthew thank you for your comment and your kind visit!
Date: 2/23/2014 8:45:00 AM
late adulthood is wisdom's gift .. zeus will agree with your insightful words, demetrious... greeat stuff that invigorates!.. huggs
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:40:00 PM
How nice to hear from you my dear nette! It has been some time! Thank you for your gracious comment!
Date: 2/23/2014 4:21:00 AM
you have perfectly captured youth in this outstandingly great pen Demetrios hugs
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:43:00 PM
You are so generous with this lovely comment! Thank you for visiting!
Date: 2/22/2014 3:41:00 PM
OUTSTANDING final line. Only the good die young, so hopefully I will be around a long long time. hahaha. GREAT work here.
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:46:00 PM
Andrea, thank you very much for your precious comment!
Date: 2/22/2014 8:50:00 AM
This is a great take on the subject Demetrios. What we thought of as old we now think of as young....Tim
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:53:00 PM
When we young we thought we knew but now that we are old we know that we didn't know! Thank you for visiting Tim!
Date: 2/22/2014 8:41:00 AM
You are a master, my friend! Why did we lose touch... it will be corrected! "The privilege of getting old"... hmmm! LOL
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:50:00 PM
Jack my dearest Montrealer and countryman, how wonderful to receive your visit and your heartfelt comment! Thank you!
Date: 2/22/2014 6:33:00 AM
Yes, death visits the young as well as the old..Some don't even get to live at all..Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one from your list..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:42:00 AM
Thank you dear Sara, for your visit and your kind words!
Date: 2/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
Yes it is a privilege to grow old! You might not have the vitality and strength of a youngster, but you are very wise to know how to get around without the incredible vigor of youth! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem here this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:44:00 AM
My friend Russell, thank you for your understanding and gracious comment!
Date: 2/22/2014 4:08:00 AM
I REALLY love this, at First I wanted to be grown, then not so grown as to be old, Then I realise that the only way to beat Old age is to die young,now I am of dubious mind. So what was understood became questionable.My "Final decision is {indubitable} to grow old gracefully- ponder my youth -stay as healthy as possible. leave as soon as that is impossible..smile.. much luv Demetrios.
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:46:00 AM
Vicki my dear, thank you for commenting in such an elaborate way! It is really a pleasure to receive your visit!

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