Daniel Cwiak Poet Monoku

Youth

smiles that shoot the room as girls appear

                                 
                        speaking in tongues youth can understand



life is difficult in the flash and go

                    
                         youth, the true aphrodisiac

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2010 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Daniel. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 12, 2010 at 3:36 AM Daniel, Excellent writing! I like the first one best, but both are really great. Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2010 at 6:28 AM Well done for the contest, also thanks for your comment on my zoo, have a nice one,..p.d

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2010 at 3:25 PM Very interesting one, Daniel. Yes, i love that last line! andrea OH, and Congrats!!

May 5, 2010 at 8:18 AM Oh for carefree life of the young. You have me smiling with this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson May 5, 2010 at 8:12 AM Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta May 5, 2010 at 6:07 AM Congrats on the win

Dr.Ram Mehta May 5, 2010 at 6:06 AM Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2010 at 5:13 AM Congrats Daniel on your HM in Brian's contest.. with this cute and all too true Monoku... enjoy your special honor .. with luv. from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne May 5, 2010 at 5:06 AM congrats on your HM in Brians contest Daniel!-Robert

Destiny Orschell May 3, 2010 at 6:05 PM Great and awesome poem...we youth are just amazing speaking unspoken languages just brilliant...hahaha...just kidding we aren't that great...Love the poem Daniel. keep it up. Love Destiny