Gregory Richard Barden Poet Epigram

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Yours In Mine

Oh so fine are you in my favorite shirt

       Divine is the ache as my hormones hurt

Sublime shape denies the need to scoff

       Yet you're finer still when you take it off.






~ 6th Place ~  in the "Hit Me With An Epi Pen" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavey, Judge & Sponsor.

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Christopher Flaherty December 14, 2019 at 6:43 PM Only criticism i could possibly make Greg. Is you should have Won. Clever , Brilliant , Witty. Love it 8 out of 7 Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2019 at 2:42 AM Ah - I'll take that kind of criticism anytime, Christopher - many thanks to you, my friend! :o)

Kim Rodrigues December 13, 2019 at 1:11 PM Yes, the way of a guy’s mind! Congratulations, Greg! Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2019 at 2:41 AM LOL - Yes, we're rather predictable at times, Kim ... blessings! :o) <3

Jean Murray December 11, 2019 at 10:40 AM As always, a sting in the tail Gregory. I love it! Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2019 at 2:40 AM Many kind thanks, Jean - so appreciated, my friend! :o) <3

Line Gauthier December 10, 2019 at 11:46 PM Congrats on your sexy number, Gregory. Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2019 at 2:40 AM Thank you very much, Line - these are fun! :o) <3

Na Na December 10, 2019 at 9:22 PM Congrats on your winning poem Greg Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2019 at 2:39 AM Thank you very much, Gregory! :o)

John Hamilton December 3, 2019 at 9:56 AM Lovely, sensual as usual. Winner!! Gregory Richard Barden December 8, 2019 at 11:37 PM Thank you so very much, John! :o)