You're the sun

You're the sun, 
And I'm the moon. 
You shine as bright as ever, 
Your warmth had always been there since forever. 
While Im still as dim as I was before,
The one that everyone ignores,
The type that no one notices when they're gone. 

You're the sun, 
And I'm the moon,
Two completely polar opposites to each other. 
One shown with utmost confidence, 
Just the thought of you blinds another.
The other out casted, and forgotten
Hidden beneath the shadows of your perfect ambition.

You're the sun,
And I'm the moon.
Our worlds will never collide with each other, 
We were never meant to be together, 
We were born to be astray,
Never crossing each other's way.

Ah how you remind me of summer, 
Just your presence enlightens my fragile and sensitive heart.

I'm the moon, 
And you're the sun. 
Maybe in another universe, 
We'll be less than 10 meters apart. 
But now, you'll always be a 10 in my heart,
And it can never be undone.

My meloncolly will end,
Once the sun rises,
Once that luminous ray of hope hit my dull eyes.
It will end, 
Once I see the sun for the final time,
My last wish. 
Just this one time, 
Just this one time, 
Come back,
Help me fulfill this impossible wish of mine.
Sincerely, 
The moon.
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Alexander Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 9:48 PM
Thanks for your time and feedback. Joy.!
Agustin Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Shi Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:51 AM
I'm glad you like my poem! And yes, God sent his only son to die for our sins so that we may spend eternal life with him in heaven, we are blessed. May God bless you today <3
Alexander Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 10:11 PM
Kio Shi, after reading your heartfelt poem. I ask myself what the sun would want me to tell you? He said that just this one time. Just this one time. He will come back. Because the sun has its time to shine, and the moon has its time to shine, and they both shine at their appropriate times. You will fulfill your impossible wish. At your appointed time.
Shi Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Thank you for your heartfelt message ^o^ And yes I agree, everyone will shine their appointed time, everyone will fulfil their wishes at the right time
Daniels Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 9:54 AM
Welcome to this Soup, Kio. ThkU for sharing your first poem here with beautiful emotions expressed. Keep writing...soon your poetry will soar. Sending Great Love., Ghairo.
Shi Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 12:54 AM
Thank you for your support! I will continue to improve, to make my poems better^_^
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