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You'Re Such a Lovely Cyclone

Hey girl! I love the way you whirl, and swirl, so deep inside my heart. you're such a lovely cyclone as you tear my mind apart. seething lava in my veins, tsunami in my breast, a hurricane that's gone insane, an earthquake that won't rest. your tremors how they move me, I simply can't resist, so I sprout wings, sweet golden things, and fly into your kiss. http://lovestruehome.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/24/2011 1:28:00 PM
jean ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:12:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jean-Pierre. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:16:00 AM
A Cyclone Attraction! Nice! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean Pierre. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:15:00 PM
A heart touching, beauty, Jean-Piere. Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Annalise
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean-Pierre
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:31:00 AM
this is nice! I like the way you led us to the kiss. I like the metaphors with the tsunami, earthquake, & hurricane. reading this made me feel light on the surface.
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:09:00 AM
I like your weather! This was really fun to read.
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