Jean-Pierre Gregoire Poet Prose Poetry

You'Re Such a Lovely Cyclone

Hey girl!
I love the way you whirl, 
and swirl,
so deep inside my heart.
you're such a lovely cyclone as you tear my mind apart.
seething lava in my veins,
tsunami in my breast,
a hurricane that's gone insane,
an earthquake that won't rest.
your tremors how they move me,
I simply can't resist,
so I sprout wings, sweet golden things,
and fly into your kiss.

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Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2011 at 1:28 PM jean ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

Janette Fisher April 24, 2011 at 12:12 PM Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 11:12 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jean-Pierre. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 19, 2011 at 4:16 AM A Cyclone Attraction! Nice! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean Pierre. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick April 18, 2011 at 12:15 PM A heart touching, beauty, Jean-Piere. Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta April 18, 2011 at 12:04 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean-Pierre

Phyllis Babcock April 18, 2011 at 9:26 AM Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl

Marcus Antwan April 18, 2011 at 6:31 AM this is nice! I like the way you led us to the kiss. I like the metaphors with the tsunami, earthquake, & hurricane. reading this made me feel light on the surface.

Soulfire April 17, 2011 at 9:09 AM I like your weather! This was really fun to read.