You'Re So Special

From a little girl I knew you were
The sweetest little thing, your wisdom
And character was overgrown. Now you’re
An adult, you’ve made it known.

Happy 21st birthday and all that’s best
You’ve ticked all the boxes and pass the test.
You’re my little girl, I love you lots.
Stay focus; keep your head screwed on,
And be about your wits. 

 A tribute to my daughter Zerelda on 
Her  21st birthday. Feb 11 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 12:11 PM
It has been a pleasure to read your beautiful poem today Abraham. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. ~~~Happy Birthday to Zerelda~~~ Love, Carol
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February 3, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Your daughter should be honored to have this tribute. Keep the creative pen flowing father of the great child. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work of the last few days for I have enjoyed writing some of my memories. Sara
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Hello There! What a beautiful tribute to your daughter. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this light and lovely poem. I have two about my daughters. My Duaghter and My Youngest One I invite you to read. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Have a great day! Scarlett
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