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You'Re Not Going To Forget Me

Even when you've chosen her and her belly is as round as a distant moon, you will ache remembering my lips, and our familiar tango of tongues. You will reach out for me again, your hands like empty cups searching for moisture to drown out the thirst of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/17/2014 9:01:00 PM
this is not a forgetful write, felicia! i love it.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/18/2014 12:49:00 AM
oh, excited to read it, felicia. do post it soon! :)) hugs
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 10:41:00 PM
I actually have a poem with a line that says, "I am a daughter of the moon". Your screen name made me think of it. Maybe I will post it soon!
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, hija de la luna. I am really enjoying your work, as well!
Date: 8/17/2014 6:47:00 PM
really nice. consice. you paint with a pallet of multiple hues and shades. thank you.
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 10:38:00 PM
Maurice, thank you for the kind words!
Date: 8/17/2014 10:26:00 AM
like this piece..! sexy but lovely.. :)
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Olive :)
Date: 8/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
Lovely piece! You show him! Love how you made your words express the feelings deep inside. Thanks for your visit to my work.
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen. Wish I really could send this to several people from my past.
Date: 8/17/2014 8:24:00 AM
A very hot, inspiring poem! Sizzles and sets ones imagination ablaze.. BBBBBravooooo!!!!!!!!!
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert!
Date: 8/16/2014 7:24:00 PM
This is a very sensual beautiful poem of love!!!
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur!

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