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You'Re My World

You’re my world
You’re everything to me
Motherhood
It’s been a joy you see

Ever since you were born
I’ve been so proud
I can’t help
telling the world out loud

When you left
it was hard to let go
It’s not easy being mum
you know

When you call
I hear your voice
I know you’re fine, so I rejoice

You’re my world
You’re everything to me
Precious son
You mean the world to me

Dedicated to my amazing son who is the light of my life

‘You’re my world’ is a Line used from the song 
Lyrics sung to the tune of 'You're my world'

Gren’s Evergreens #4 Cilla Black
Sponsored by Teppo Gren

7/7/18

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Marc Acrich July 16, 2018 at 10:22 AM remind me of this song https://youtu.be/36xZ-4DgWTA Jan Allison July 16, 2018 at 11:36 AM Just checked and he is singing the Cilla Black song which I used to inspire the poem:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison July 16, 2018 at 11:34 AM thanks Marc, I will drop by and listen to that one:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry July 13, 2018 at 8:44 PM Congratulations on your win. This is beautiful! Jan Allison July 14, 2018 at 4:20 PM Thanks Susan, it makes me a little emotional every time I get a comment:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May July 13, 2018 at 6:06 AM A precious bond..Congrats on your win Jan Jan Allison July 13, 2018 at 6:55 AM Thanks Joseph, my son is truly amazing:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong July 13, 2018 at 4:57 AM Awwww, I love this beautiful loving tribute to your son Jan. I hope this is a top winner. It is going into my faves my friend! I can relate perfectly! : ) xxoo Jan Allison July 13, 2018 at 6:54 AM Thanks Connie, I still get emotional when I read it:-) hugs Jan

Gershon Wolf July 13, 2018 at 12:11 AM Gorgeous! The feelings of every true mother perfectly captured in picture and poesy. Bravo, Jan! :) gw Jan Allison July 13, 2018 at 2:51 AM I get emotional just seeing the title Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger July 8, 2018 at 7:36 PM Beautifully done, Jan. I do not dare try Lyrics. Much too advanced. You nailed this at a feeling level. Good luck! Jan Allison July 9, 2018 at 2:58 AM Give it a try Caren, I am not musical but when I am inspired by a contest i give it my best shot. Am so proud of this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. July 8, 2018 at 4:23 PM Hi Jan, I can most definitely relate, becoming a mother was the best thing that happened to me hands down. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison July 9, 2018 at 2:58 AM Thanks Alexis, my son is the best thing to happen in my life:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance July 8, 2018 at 2:56 PM :) oh the joys of parenthood, so lovely. hugs Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thanks Cas:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud July 8, 2018 at 11:42 AM definitely heartfelt with a warmth for a child every mum always gives in her lifetime, jan!...huggs Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 11:49 AM Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Lyric Man July 8, 2018 at 11:35 AM This moved me to emotions that run deep. In every way, this write is exceptional! Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 11:48 AM aww LM I am SO glad you commented on this particular poem, I so rarely write lyrics (leave it to you guys) and i wasn't originally going to enter the contest but I listened to all 3 tracks yesterday. i had a different theme then walked away from that for a while and came back with this idea, got to say I get tears when I read it. :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2018 at 11:10 AM Just beautiful Jan. Thanks for your visit. Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 11:20 AM thanks so much Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus July 8, 2018 at 11:07 AM These words flow from the heart, Jan! A mother's love won't diminish, even with the passing of years. 'You're my world' is an excellent choice. Hugs // paul Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 11:20 AM I started the poem with a different theme but then had second thoughts and am so so please with the poem. I must send it to my son:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile July 8, 2018 at 9:11 AM Such a beautiful and loving tribute, Jan There is no greater blessing that I can think of than to have a loving mother xxoo Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 10:41 AM I rarely write poems about him but this was the perfect song to use as a prompt:-) Love him to bits:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith July 8, 2018 at 6:43 AM He'll always be your baby whether he likes it or not :) Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 7:25 AM He sure will be Tim!:-) hugs Jan xx

Samuel Otieng July 8, 2018 at 6:36 AM Hey Jan. This poem is simply Beautiful. Shows how loving and caring you are to your son. Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 7:26 AM He is the most wonderful son in the world... but I am a little biased:-) hugs jan xx

Virginia Waters July 7, 2018 at 7:18 PM this bought tears as immediately bought own son to mind -beautifully said Jan Allison July 8, 2018 at 3:28 AM Makes me emotional too Virginia, I am more used to humourous poems but never know what my muse will come up with next:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane July 7, 2018 at 4:41 PM I love this nostalgic write, Jan. I feel exactly the same way about both of my kiddies. Love the song, too. Jan Allison July 7, 2018 at 5:06 PM Its a lovely song Lin and so sad to think Cilla died all too soon, I feel emotional every time I try and put my words to the music, must show the poem to my wonderful son:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit July 7, 2018 at 4:40 PM Excellent in every way--you wrote a winning poem, Jan. A sweet tribute to your son. Jan Allison July 7, 2018 at 5:05 PM Thanks Vijay:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings July 7, 2018 at 4:17 PM Beautiful version of Cilla's song, Jan. Good luck in the contest. // Barry Jan Allison July 7, 2018 at 4:19 PM Thanks Barry, I would have loved to do more stanzas to fit in with the entire song but was restricted with the line limitation:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2018 at 2:38 PM - Real love from a mother ... beautiful, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison July 7, 2018 at 3:40 PM Thanks Anne-Lise I get teary reading the lines to go to the tune, its a lovely song by Cilla, she passed away all too soon but her music lives on:-) hugs Jan xx