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You’re my world You’re everything to me Motherhood It’s been a joy you see Ever since you were born I’ve been so proud I can’t help telling the world out loud When you left it was hard to let go It’s not easy being mum you know When you call I hear your voice I know you’re fine, so I rejoice You’re my world You’re everything to me Precious son You mean the world to me Dedicated to my amazing son who is the light of my life ‘You’re my world’ is a Line used from the song Lyrics sung to the tune of 'You're my world' Gren’s Evergreens #4 Cilla Black Sponsored by Teppo Gren 7/7/18

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Marc Acrich

Date: 7/16/2018 10:22:00 AM

remind me of this song https://youtu.be/36xZ-4DgWTA

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2018 11:36:00 AM

Just checked and he is singing the Cilla Black song which I used to inspire the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2018 11:34:00 AM

thanks Marc, I will drop by and listen to that one:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/13/2018 8:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. This is beautiful!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Susan, it makes me a little emotional every time I get a comment:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2018 6:06:00 AM

A precious bond..Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2018 6:55:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, my son is truly amazing:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/13/2018 4:57:00 AM

Awwww, I love this beautiful loving tribute to your son Jan. I hope this is a top winner. It is going into my faves my friend! I can relate perfectly! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I still get emotional when I read it:-) hugs Jan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/13/2018 12:11:00 AM

Gorgeous! The feelings of every true mother perfectly captured in picture and poesy. Bravo, Jan! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2018 2:51:00 AM

I get emotional just seeing the title Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/8/2018 7:36:00 PM

Beautifully done, Jan. I do not dare try Lyrics. Much too advanced. You nailed this at a feeling level. Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2018 2:58:00 AM

Give it a try Caren, I am not musical but when I am inspired by a contest i give it my best shot. Am so proud of this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/8/2018 4:23:00 PM

Hi Jan, I can most definitely relate, becoming a mother was the best thing that happened to me hands down. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2018 2:58:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, my son is the best thing to happen in my life:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2018 2:56:00 PM

:) oh the joys of parenthood, so lovely. hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thanks Cas:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2018 11:42:00 AM

definitely heartfelt with a warmth for a child every mum always gives in her lifetime, jan!...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2018 11:35:00 AM

This moved me to emotions that run deep. In every way, this write is exceptional!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 11:48:00 AM

aww LM I am SO glad you commented on this particular poem, I so rarely write lyrics (leave it to you guys) and i wasn't originally going to enter the contest but I listened to all 3 tracks yesterday. i had a different theme then walked away from that for a while and came back with this idea, got to say I get tears when I read it. :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2018 11:10:00 AM

Just beautiful Jan. Thanks for your visit.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 11:20:00 AM

thanks so much Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2018 11:07:00 AM

These words flow from the heart, Jan! A mother's love won't diminish, even with the passing of years. 'You're my world' is an excellent choice. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 11:20:00 AM

I started the poem with a different theme but then had second thoughts and am so so please with the poem. I must send it to my son:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/8/2018 9:11:00 AM

Such a beautiful and loving tribute, Jan There is no greater blessing that I can think of than to have a loving mother xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 10:41:00 AM

I rarely write poems about him but this was the perfect song to use as a prompt:-) Love him to bits:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2018 6:43:00 AM

He'll always be your baby whether he likes it or not :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 7:25:00 AM

He sure will be Tim!:-) hugs Jan xx

Samuel Otieng

Date: 7/8/2018 6:36:00 AM

Hey Jan. This poem is simply Beautiful. Shows how loving and caring you are to your son.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 7:26:00 AM

He is the most wonderful son in the world... but I am a little biased:-) hugs jan xx

Virginia Waters

Date: 7/7/2018 7:18:00 PM

this bought tears as immediately bought own son to mind -beautifully said

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 3:28:00 AM

Makes me emotional too Virginia, I am more used to humourous poems but never know what my muse will come up with next:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/7/2018 4:41:00 PM

I love this nostalgic write, Jan. I feel exactly the same way about both of my kiddies. Love the song, too.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 5:06:00 PM

Its a lovely song Lin and so sad to think Cilla died all too soon, I feel emotional every time I try and put my words to the music, must show the poem to my wonderful son:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2018 4:40:00 PM

Excellent in every way--you wrote a winning poem, Jan. A sweet tribute to your son.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Vijay:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 7/7/2018 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful version of Cilla's song, Jan. Good luck in the contest. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Barry, I would have loved to do more stanzas to fit in with the entire song but was restricted with the line limitation:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2018 2:38:00 PM

- Real love from a mother ... beautiful, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise I get teary reading the lines to go to the tune, its a lovely song by Cilla, she passed away all too soon but her music lives on:-) hugs Jan xx