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You'Re My What....?!

This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. You're my EVERYTHING. You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, You're my THOUGHTS, You're my EVERYTHING. This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. So now..... be part of my..... LOVE. *please comment if you don't mind, i'd really like to know your thoughts (fav poem if you like)* -Angel4eva23

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Edward Orozco

Date: 3/31/2011 1:48:00 AM

beautiful thoughts and expressions i love it. - edward

Anthony Beesley

Date: 10/12/2010 1:20:00 PM

fixation turns into frustration

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2010 3:40:00 PM

I lvoe the poem, full of emotion and love. Just dont let it step you to a side.. Seems like anice ride. have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/17/2010 7:47:00 AM

Who could resist? This one shoots right into one's head. I like the daring. I'm sorry to be late. I'm lazy and seldom check my mail. It's more than lazy, though. My eyes are bad and I have to budget my time at the laptop. Dave

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/13/2010 6:00:00 AM

I could not agree more with Deborah..... You must be able to love yourself before you can love someone else.... Wonderful write my friend...:JP]

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/12/2010 2:32:00 PM

You are going to a dangerous place. You must be all those things for yourself ..first. Light & Love

Anthony Beesley

Date: 9/12/2010 2:03:00 PM

a rare and beautiful beast