You'Re My What....?!

This is not my WORLD.

           You're my WORLD.

           You're my EVERYTHING.

           You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, 

           You're my THOUGHTS,

           You're my EVERYTHING.
            
           This is not my WORLD.
           You're my WORLD.
                     
          So now.....
                be part of my.....
                                    LOVE.



                  *please comment if you don't mind, i'd really like to know your thoughts 
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                                                            -Angel4eva23
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Orozco Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 1:48 AM
beautiful thoughts and expressions i love it. - edward
Beesley Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 1:20 PM
fixation turns into frustration
A   Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 3:40 PM
I lvoe the poem, full of emotion and love. Just dont let it step you to a side.. Seems like anice ride. have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
Austin Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Who could resist? This one shoots right into one's head. I like the daring. I'm sorry to be late. I'm lazy and seldom check my mail. It's more than lazy, though. My eyes are bad and I have to budget my time at the laptop. Dave
Pickett Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 6:00 AM
I could not agree more with Deborah..... You must be able to love yourself before you can love someone else.... Wonderful write my friend...:JP]
Guzzi Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:32 PM
You are going to a dangerous place. You must be all those things for yourself ..first. Light & Love
Beesley Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:03 PM
a rare and beautiful beast
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