You're gone

I wait upon the threshold, bare,
A hollow silence chills the air,
I call your name, but none reply,
Only my echoes, and they die.
Yet I linger, lost, sorrow on,
Yearning for a voice, long gone.
Hearing phantom calls everywhere,
You’re not there.

I remember when I held you near,
Your presence lingers, ghostly, clear,
I reach into the empty sphere,
As if you will embrace me here.
I hug and hold you tight with care,
But I only feel the cold air,
You’re not there.

A part of me believes you breathe,
Your milky scent drifts underneath.
I feel your softness, warm, distilled.
I see your eyes, blessing me still.
Though what's unreal is your stare,
You’re not there.

I dream, I weave our lives as one,
Together still, though it’s done,
In my mind, it’s you, always fair,
But none of this survival, I am aware,
You’re not there.

My future, past, vast, unfurled,
My everything, really, my entire world.
In the end, though all I could care,
You’re not there.

Even the brightest dreams descend
And you, perfection, came to an end.
You’re not there.

Nothing can compensate despair.
You’re not there.

You’re gone.



Rest in peace, baby. Whenever I look into the sky, I see you, the brightest star. I miss you, and I’ll always love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 4:37 PM
This is beautiful melancholic yet deeply emotional in a way most anyone could relate to. Love this!
Godwin Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:25 AM
Excellent poem. This poem brings up the SOUP question - is write fact-fiction / comment-console. Often commenters don't do both & I feel disappointed. If you've suffered loss, my human reaches out to yours in understanding. Seems loss enabled you to write this beautiful poem with a depth difficult to articulate w/o experiencing grief. The repeated line emphasizes a need for acceptance that's hard to achieve, and the entire poem reflects a heavy, intense missing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Crandall Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Sad, and powerful, with a painful refrain.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 11:39 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful yet sad write/story you have here. So Very Sorry. FAV for me... Wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:27 AM
- A great poem with emotions, Reya :) - hugs
Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Disheartening, isn't it? Makes for nice poetry, though.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Wow, this is a far reaching, deeply moving poem. Very well written. I can feel it. :)
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