You're Always On My Mind
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Poetic Form: Lyric
Inspired: 2024 June 04
*13th Place*
You are or were always on my mind
Contest Judged: 2024 June 08
Sponsored by: Jay Narain
Image: N/A
There is much you haven't told me
All the good can't be saved
And for that, I cannot blame you
As attempts seldom me
The many things you said and did
You knew you took the time
You was forever on my mind (You was forever on my mind)
You're always on my mind
Many times you could have told me
At those good partied times
And you know I always sold you
You're so glad for those lines
You made me stand out in the class
You told me I was blind
You was forever on my mind (You was forever on my mind)
You're always on my mind
Give me
Give me just a little more time, just a little more time
...just a little more time, just a little more time ...
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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