Your 'You'

You are what you do What you do becomes you When you think you can't do it Work through it; you'll do it Then your confidence grows The path of doing you chose Your 'You's' in new clothes

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2020 2:31:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, I like this poem. I like what it says . I like how the words all flow together. My fav. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2020 2:24:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, you are very welcomed. this poem spoke to me. So became my fav. have a nice day my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/12/2020 5:14:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for an absolutely lovely comment and the fav! Warm wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2020 1:51:00 AM

That last line is pretty danged brilliant.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2020 9:03:00 PM

Love you choice of adjectives/participles: 'danged.' Goes so danged well with (my) 'brilliance.' ~ Condemned Lightbulb

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/10/2020 8:08:00 AM

This wonderful, light-hearted poem put a big, airy smile on Meesa face, Gershon! LOVE the go-getter attitude. Cool poem. Love and joy always.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2020 11:11:00 AM

Hey, Freddie! Thanks so much for the Love and Joy! Let's go-get-'em! Cheers, Gershon