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Your 'You'

You are what you do What you do becomes you When you think you can't do it Work through it; you'll do it Then your confidence grows The path of doing you chose Your 'You's' in new clothes

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Date: 1/12/2020 2:31:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, I like this poem. I like what it says . I like how the words all flow together. My fav. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2020 2:24:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, you are very welcomed. this poem spoke to me. So became my fav. have a nice day my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/12/2020 5:14:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for an absolutely lovely comment and the fav! Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/11/2020 1:51:00 AM
That last line is pretty danged brilliant.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2020 9:03:00 PM
Love you choice of adjectives/participles: 'danged.' Goes so danged well with (my) 'brilliance.' ~ Condemned Lightbulb
Date: 1/10/2020 8:08:00 AM
This wonderful, light-hearted poem put a big, airy smile on Meesa face, Gershon! LOVE the go-getter attitude. Cool poem. Love and joy always.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2020 11:11:00 AM
Hey, Freddie! Thanks so much for the Love and Joy! Let's go-get-'em! Cheers, Gershon