Gershon Wolf Poet Couplet

Your 'You'

You are what you do
  What you do becomes you

When you think you can't do it
  Work through it; you'll do it

Then your confidence grows
  The path of doing you chose

   Your 'You's' in new clothes

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 12, 2020 at 2:31 PM Hello Gershon Wolf, I like this poem. I like what it says . I like how the words all flow together. My fav. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2020 at 2:24 PM Hello Gershon Wolf, you are very welcomed. this poem spoke to me. So became my fav. have a nice day my friend. Gershon Wolf January 12, 2020 at 5:14 PM Darlene, thank you so much for an absolutely lovely comment and the fav! Warm wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger January 11, 2020 at 1:51 AM That last line is pretty danged brilliant. Gershon Wolf January 11, 2020 at 9:03 PM Love you choice of adjectives/participles: 'danged.' Goes so danged well with (my) 'brilliance.' ~ Condemned Lightbulb

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 10, 2020 at 8:08 AM This wonderful, light-hearted poem put a big, airy smile on Meesa face, Gershon! LOVE the go-getter attitude. Cool poem. Love and joy always. Gershon Wolf January 10, 2020 at 11:11 AM Hey, Freddie! Thanks so much for the Love and Joy! Let's go-get-'em! Cheers, Gershon