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Your Words Are Slow ;

The air becomes colder every time you leave I try to hold on to as many memories. The day you left my world fell apart It felt like a shot, straight to the heart. I know your out there in this cold world, alone. Do you miss me like I miss you or are we in two different zones? You say you love me but something has changed I guess some things can never be the same. The times we spent were something new I always knew right then, I could trust you. Trust you with my life, forever. I just didn’t know forever could end so soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 3:39:00 PM
hmm, I hope your heart keeps the love...
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 2:06:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! The light is always on here. Check out some of my works if you have the time. I would like a fresh victim. I mean opinion. ;)
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:28:00 AM
sad but beautiful
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:09:00 AM
Ahsley, this is a cool poem. I like the last two lines. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:11:00 AM
nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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