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Your words, a rapier through my heart. I bleed from a wounded soul. My tears, a salty river. Trust is a past, not present, concept. I am no longer me. Your words have forever changed me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2015 12:46:00 AM
I am a free verse kind of guy. This one works for me!
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Date: 2/15/2013 11:54:00 PM
wow, the power of words. how they can tear a person apart. This one really shows it, Francine. Love this powerful little poem
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:10:00 PM
This is a heart-rending write. Very impressive. Thanks for notifying me of the win of my poem Winter Be Gone, Francine. I regret the error in your first name caused by my optical illusion. It has since been corrected. Regards. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:21:00 PM
I can relate to this very touching piece..well done. BG
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:06:00 PM
Powerful emotion in this, Francine! This is good! Love, Kim
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