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Your words from your mouth rolled in to whirlwind And shot in my head the speed of a bullet There they stayed causing havoc like an earthquake Everyday they stirred From one place to another Causing me extreme pain I can feel it in my head So much pain What is the cost of it ever leaving Or will it stay in some corner of my brain Forever I will never forget the hurt they caused.
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Agustin Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Parveen Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Thankyou for you lovely words and coming by Beata. Will come by later.
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