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You tried your best to hurt me. It was a bullet through the chest. You built me up just to tear me down. You told me so many lies. You pretended to love me pretended to care. This I could not see. You got your wish the one you wanted all along. To get me to fall for your fake bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 3:43:00 PM
The trait of man to do what he can. Sometimes it's good, sometimes it's bad, and many times it turns out to be sad >> James
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Date: 10/13/2010 3:01:00 PM
Kinda sad to have relationship that goes all wrong..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:44:00 PM
a deep relatonship followed by a deep hurt, tragic, but well written. thank you, chuck
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:49:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Cheyenne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:47:00 PM
wow, a wish you did not ask for, but fell into, deep write, I really liked that second stanza, enjoyed your write..p.d.
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