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Your Wings Carve the Sea

Stiff wings
Of the sooty tern
Carve the edge of this corral sea
Then, you free fall but never touching land
Glide, tumble and soar above the white sand
Still, your wings carved the sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 8:43:00 PM
Unique imagery and excellent word choices... BRAVO Gregory! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:29:00 AM
I now must google what a tern looks like! Always something new to learn. Light & Love
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