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Your Wildest Dreams

Mystifying beauty
 Voluptuous shape
Infiltrating your subconscious
 I float on clouds of grace.
The source of your yearning
 The one that you secretly crave
The intricacies of my splendor
 runs deeper than the oceans.
Words once only written
 are now poetry in motion 
Hypnotizing your desires, 
like an aromatic love potion
Your hidden fantasies
 are now boldly spoken.
Compromising your composure 
You become my seeker
Like your silent confessions, 
I am your secret keeper
Your imagination's creation, 
I am now your reality
The unbroken promise to man,
I am the manifestation 
I surpass your wildest dreams

Chiquita Chiamaka Baity

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Kingsley Awoh

Date: 10/15/2011 1:18:00 PM

I surpass your wildest dreams

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/23/2011 7:16:00 PM

There you go. You just burned out my computer. Vince

William Crocker

Date: 8/17/2011 12:32:00 AM

chiquita,I love the way you bring out the inner feelings in new ways .You are very talented..crossfox

Wole Francis

Date: 8/16/2011 1:44:00 PM

ITS LIKE UR SPIRIT IS HIGH HERE. nice one .less i forget ,tanx for ur comment on my poem

Stephen Parker

Date: 8/14/2011 7:03:00 PM

Another fitting title would be Dream Maker or Dream Weaver. A cacophonous medley of titilating opposites. A well-conceived schema! Enjoyed your scintillating rhapsody!

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/14/2011 6:46:00 PM

talk about confidence!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/14/2011 2:54:00 PM

Sensation created in your write. Enjoyed the last two lines, " I am the manifestation....dreams'' with whole poem. your pen talks. bl

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/14/2011 1:40:00 PM

Sensual and poetic. Nice one! xoxo Robert.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 5:53:00 AM

hehehe jajajaj! i love this,,, and i see another title underneath poem.. called. lead and i will follow. The title alone has me wondering. by the way... a very intriguing poem..the abomination is the best accommodation for any women... enjoyed and thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/13/2011 10:15:00 PM

Nicely done. Every man's wildest dream. A rich woman to take care of him. ;p Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/13/2011 10:11:00 PM

There is a song by the Moody Blues which has the same title as your poem. Wonder if you know it. Your poem is extremely evocative and alluring. Thanks you for your kind words on my poem. Love & Peace Matthew Anish

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/13/2011 9:35:00 PM

Awesome, just plain awesome! Keep up the awesome work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 9:23:00 PM

well a confidence exudes from these lines Chiquita.. luv the I am he manifestation ..I surpass your wildes dreams.. super cool ..good luck in the contest ...luv..

John Smith

Date: 8/13/2011 9:06:00 PM

Chiquita, No more dates for me. I'll just watch for your poems.