Your Very Best

Sometimes a poem just comes to you,
                   like a loyal pet when called.
                   Written in a moment`s time
                   when chaotic thought has stalled.
                   A time when all emotions peak
                   yet mind remains sedated.
                   You hit the ball right outta the park,
                   touching home with what`s created.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 2, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Charlie.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!
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July 2, 2018 at 4:05 AM
Thanks for reading and liking Lyric man.
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April 30, 2018 at 5:41 PM
So true, Charlie. Well said an what an awesome feeling indeed.
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April 30, 2018 at 6:06 PM
I so appreciate your critique Line. Some days i`ll work hours on a poem and nothing. I wrote that today in 5 minutes.
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