Your Tray

Deep in the ocean
Two buds bloom in joyous dark
And then it is light

The sky in the boat 
Rides the sail and moonlit wind
Become shining stars

From the mystic bridge
In awe and love we look at
Both the oranges

It is poetry
World poetry day today
Words from your joy tray
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21 March 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/22/2017 6:11:00 PM
I could have sworn I commented to this gem just a few hours ago. Deja vu??? GREAT poetry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:45:00 PM
Happy Deja vu! ... THANK you ...
Date: 3/22/2017 2:36:00 PM
Hello Probir. Then this calls for a celebration in honor of the written word and this art we call poetry. Your entry is beautiful. Very poetic. That first line alone of "Deep in the ocean" Just beautiful. Well done. Enjoy the night.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:49:00 PM
Morning reads the night in the sender's hue ... Thank you ...
Date: 3/22/2017 12:32:00 PM
..Your haiku are a toast to the day..Nicely penned
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 3/22/2017 6:52:00 AM
You always amaze me with your inspiring Haiku dear, Probir! Superb!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend ...
Date: 3/22/2017 6:31:00 AM
Happy World Poetry day! lovely Haiku ^_^
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:29:00 AM
Happy World Poetry day, Eiza and thank you for liking the poem ...
Date: 3/21/2017 11:36:00 PM
Poetry day! I never knew there was such a thing until now! 4 great haikus to celebrate!
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thank you ...
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