Your Touch

Deep within my chest
My heart 
Pounds
Racing
Seconds 
My hands
Grip 
Back
as you 
...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Crocker Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 8:22 PM
Ashley, felt as though the poem was unfinished until my heart and mind began to complete the deep feeling I had within.A wonderful poem.Crossfox- William
Plotczyk Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Thanks William, yes at first glance .. it may seem as tho it is unfinished but this is meant so that you have to feel the poem to know the ending.
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