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Your Tantalizing Love

Oh my darling,
Let me lay my head between your breasts,
Smelling the sweet fragrance from your precious skin;
Allow your tender arms to embrace and caress me softly
While I gently kiss the nape of your beautiful neck;
Let me hear sweet whispers from your succulent lips
Resonating from the warm tips of my fingers
Exploring, moving, touching...let me...let me...
“Oh my darling, please control yourself!"

© Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 8/28/08
All Rights Reserved, Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA
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C.C Bloomsfield Date: 6/23/2010 9:55:00 AM Oolaala,this is the passionate part of Mr.Spence,Seducing!Good job :)C elene! Login to Reply

Lee Nguyen Date: 7/5/2009 10:22:00 PM haha. i love this poem. its very amusing and very romantic. and erotic haha. Login to Reply

Mark Snyder Date: 10/13/2008 8:49:00 PM after all that I need a bowl of ice cream.lol nice peice. Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 9/29/2008 4:08:00 PM Joe Now thats love what a romantic piece I love the ending! Laura Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/23/2008 3:04:00 PM Joe this piece is too short. thanks for your comments JHL Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 9/19/2008 12:57:00 PM a very lovely poem so tender and warm a great romantic piece. Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 9/11/2008 10:01:00 PM now I remember, this silly comment I made here, I apologise should have read your other poems and came to reality. beautiful poetry. Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 8/31/2008 6:07:00 PM huh? Login to Reply

Mari Nova Date: 8/29/2008 6:34:00 PM This poem gave me goose bumps and chill. Wow ! Absolutely astonishing !!! Login to Reply

Deneen White Date: 8/28/2008 5:11:00 PM what a nice romantic write, thanks for the comment on rain dance, take care D-nyce Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 8/28/2008 7:34:00 AM oh my, I guess if I'd had such congugal bliss awaiting, I also would have taken a leave of absence from writing! Way to go, Joseph! This is tastefully done..not overdone nor harsh. Cloudy soft, but not nebulous or hazy. Chivalry and romaticism are kept alive in the hearts of those like you. :) God bless you and yours..with love, Mikki Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/28/2008 5:26:00 AM Too hot to handle! My, oh, my....this poem was fun to read....clever writing, and "almost" X rated!! Loved it!.....Carrie Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 8/28/2008 5:22:00 AM Now Joseph, The passion is truly flowing within the lines here, enough to fog up ones specs, so to speak...lol, but that last line “Oh my darling, please control yourself!" was a tickler... not so sure about that type of self restraint however, it is a pleasurable write :-) Passion, love and laughter thank you for sharing such a marvelous read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Michael Degenhardt Date: 8/28/2008 4:50:00 AM Joseph, this is a wonderfully steamy write. Love the easy touch of humor at the end as well as the use of dialogue within the write. Very well written. Michael Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/28/2008 3:59:00 AM Well that was awfully steamy Joseph - Thankfully you had enough self control towards the end to calm her down or no telling what would have happened - Sure is nice to have you back - God Bless you and your family Joseph Login to Reply