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Your Tantalizing Love

Oh my darling, Let me lay my head between your breasts, Smelling the sweet fragrance from your precious skin; Allow your tender arms to embrace and caress me softly While I gently kiss the nape of your beautiful neck; Let me hear sweet whispers from your succulent lips Resonating from the warm tips of my fingers Exploring, moving, touching...let me...let me... “Oh my darling, please control yourself!" © Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 8/28/08 All Rights Reserved, Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA Senior Advisor, to Founder of Motivational Strips Ambassador De Literature Noble Star of Literature 2018 Living Legend of the 21st Century Pentasiv B World Friendship Poetry Featured Poet 2019

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/23/2010 9:55:00 AM

Oolaala,this is the passionate part of Mr.Spence,Seducing!Good job :)C elene!

Lee Nguyen

Date: 7/5/2009 10:22:00 PM

haha. i love this poem. its very amusing and very romantic. and erotic haha.

Mark Snyder

Date: 10/13/2008 8:49:00 PM

after all that I need a bowl of ice cream.lol nice peice.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/29/2008 4:08:00 PM

Joe Now thats love what a romantic piece I love the ending! Laura

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/23/2008 3:04:00 PM

Joe this piece is too short. thanks for your comments JHL

James Foulk

Date: 9/19/2008 12:57:00 PM

a very lovely poem so tender and warm a great romantic piece.

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/11/2008 10:01:00 PM

now I remember, this silly comment I made here, I apologise should have read your other poems and came to reality. beautiful poetry.

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 6:07:00 PM

huh?

Mari Nova

Date: 8/29/2008 6:34:00 PM

This poem gave me goose bumps and chill. Wow ! Absolutely astonishing !!!

Deneen White

Date: 8/28/2008 5:11:00 PM

what a nice romantic write, thanks for the comment on rain dance, take care D-nyce

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/28/2008 7:34:00 AM

oh my, I guess if I'd had such congugal bliss awaiting, I also would have taken a leave of absence from writing! Way to go, Joseph! This is tastefully done..not overdone nor harsh. Cloudy soft, but not nebulous or hazy. Chivalry and romaticism are kept alive in the hearts of those like you. :) God bless you and yours..with love, Mikki

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/28/2008 5:26:00 AM

Too hot to handle! My, oh, my....this poem was fun to read....clever writing, and "almost" X rated!! Loved it!.....Carrie

Adell Foster

Date: 8/28/2008 5:22:00 AM

Now Joseph, The passion is truly flowing within the lines here, enough to fog up ones specs, so to speak...lol, but that last line “Oh my darling, please control yourself!" was a tickler... not so sure about that type of self restraint however, it is a pleasurable write :-) Passion, love and laughter thank you for sharing such a marvelous read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/28/2008 4:50:00 AM

Joseph, this is a wonderfully steamy write. Love the easy touch of humor at the end as well as the use of dialogue within the write. Very well written. Michael

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/28/2008 3:59:00 AM

Well that was awfully steamy Joseph - Thankfully you had enough self control towards the end to calm her down or no telling what would have happened - Sure is nice to have you back - God Bless you and your family Joseph