Your Tantalizing Love

Oh my darling,
Let me lay my head between your breasts,
Smelling the sweet fragrance from your precious skin;
Allow your tender arms to embrace and caress me softly
While I gently kiss the nape of your beautiful neck;
Let me hear sweet whispers from your succulent lips
Resonating from the warm tips of my fingers
Exploring, moving, touching...let me...let me...
“Oh my darling, please control yourself!"

© Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 8/28/08
All Rights Reserved, Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA
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Bloomsfield Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Oolaala,this is the passionate part of Mr.Spence,Seducing!Good job :)C elene!
Nguyen Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 10:22 PM
haha. i love this poem. its very amusing and very romantic. and erotic haha.
Snyder Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 8:49 PM
after all that I need a bowl of ice cream.lol nice peice.
Mckenzie Avatar
September 29, 2008 at 4:08 PM
Joe Now thats love what a romantic piece I love the ending! Laura
Loving Iii Avatar
September 23, 2008 at 3:04 PM
Joe this piece is too short. thanks for your comments JHL
Foulk Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 12:57 PM
a very lovely poem so tender and warm a great romantic piece.
Burton Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 10:01 PM
now I remember, this silly comment I made here, I apologise should have read your other poems and came to reality. beautiful poetry.
Burton Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 6:07 PM
huh?
Nova Avatar
August 29, 2008 at 6:34 PM
This poem gave me goose bumps and chill. Wow ! Absolutely astonishing !!!
White Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 5:11 PM
what a nice romantic write, thanks for the comment on rain dance, take care D-nyce
Mac Donald Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 7:34 AM
oh my, I guess if I'd had such congugal bliss awaiting, I also would have taken a leave of absence from writing! Way to go, Joseph! This is tastefully done..not overdone nor harsh. Cloudy soft, but not nebulous or hazy. Chivalry and romaticism are kept alive in the hearts of those like you. :) God bless you and yours..with love, Mikki
Richards Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 5:26 AM
Too hot to handle! My, oh, my....this poem was fun to read....clever writing, and "almost" X rated!! Loved it!.....Carrie
Foster Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 5:22 AM
Now Joseph, The passion is truly flowing within the lines here, enough to fog up ones specs, so to speak...lol, but that last line “Oh my darling, please control yourself!" was a tickler... not so sure about that type of self restraint however, it is a pleasurable write :-) Passion, love and laughter thank you for sharing such a marvelous read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Degenhardt Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 4:50 AM
Joseph, this is a wonderfully steamy write. Love the easy touch of humor at the end as well as the use of dialogue within the write. Very well written. Michael
Jordan Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 3:59 AM
Well that was awfully steamy Joseph - Thankfully you had enough self control towards the end to calm her down or no telling what would have happened - Sure is nice to have you back - God Bless you and your family Joseph
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