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I watched the golden sunset, thinking love was out of reach until you walked into my life as waves rolled on the beach. I vaguely remember my yesterdays, the things I used to do. My happiness is overwhelming, and it's all because of you. I know the taste of sweet wine when you softly kiss my lips and with your hand in mine, I feel a tingling in my fingertips. When you look at me with love in your eyes, I yearn for you. I would never disguise this love that always seems brand new. My soul would surely cry to spend one night without you near and my heart would want to die from seeing each forlorn tear. There's a hunger deep inside of me that only you can sate like the roaring of the tide when taking the shore for a mate. But my appetite is not for food to be eaten with my fingers. You always put me in the mood when your teasing lingers. No need to peruse a menu to find the entrée I'm waiting for You're the appetizer on my mind, and I'll always want more. Tonight we'll dine a little later, but first I think I'd like to flirt. If you will be my waiter, I promise to be your sweet dessert. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm February 12, 2016 Nayda Negron's Love Poem Contest

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Date: 2/16/2016 5:37:00 PM
oh, waiter...desert, but Lin, i thought waiters only carry deserts on trays, they do nothing else with it, oops, they'd serve it out to someone and say "...desert, my favorite, enjoy sir!" lol, i'll advice you that if he's a waiter then change him into an EATER...just joking, nice write their and a very good use of words, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:20:00 AM
My waiter(fictional of course) is multi-talented. Thanks for reading this one.
Date: 2/16/2016 9:16:00 AM
great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:21:00 AM
The level of your kind comments far exceeds my writing ability, but I thank you very much.
Date: 2/16/2016 2:39:00 AM
Lin help me.. I am hungry! I am craving for an appetizer.... show me the way... Teach me .. beautiful painting.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/16/2016 9:18:00 AM
Oh Funom....thanks...lol
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:16:00 AM
Lol Lin.... You gave him a very smart answer...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
You said it... I lost my utensils few years ago... Perfect..
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/16/2016 4:42:00 AM
lol You need the right utensils. Thank you.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:18:00 PM
this is so so cute, Lin. I think it will be on the list for sure!!
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ we'll see, but what ever, it was fun to write!
Date: 2/12/2016 9:18:00 AM
DEEEliteful my dear! A perfect menu option for Valentine's Day! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/12/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks, Keith. It sounds pretty tasty.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:28:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading this. nice one.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Yinlaifa.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:19:00 AM
Oh what a clever sensual poem Lin good luck in the contest. I hope Nayda favours the flavours in your poetic lines:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. I didn't hesitate while writing it, but did before posting... ah well ~ they ARE married. ;)

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