Your Sunshine (A Collaboration W/Audrey Carey)

Time tends to stand still when we come together
Soft kisses break my will, and I float light as a feather
Pretty brown eyes have me high, making my insides feel funny
It’s paradise! You see it in my eyes-you taste like honey!
Your manicured hands touch my face sending chills down my spine
A tingling sensation as we embrace surrounds me in your sunshine!

Time tends to stand still as we lean into one another
Imaginings run wild; and emotions overflow even further
Your strong hands hold me tenderly in our embrace
Intense brown eyes, into my soul, lovingly gaze 
I’m trembling; loneliness is dispelled in the moment and time
Unwrapped, I’m immersed in your sunshine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 4:45 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Jimmy. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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May 18, 2010 at 1:02 PM
A meeting of minds creating magic - wonderful piece. Rgds Janette
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May 18, 2010 at 12:03 PM
I guess brown eyes attract. Lovely collaboration. You two do a great job together - two birds of the same feather. Thanks for sharing. Joe
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