Your Sunshine (A Collaboration W/Jimmy M. Anderson)

Time tends to stand still when we come together
Soft kisses break my will, and I float light as a feather
Pretty brown eyes have me high, making my insides feel funny
It’s paradise! You see it in my eyes-you taste like honey!
Your manicured hands touch my face, send chills down my spine
A tingling sensation as we embrace surrounds me in your sunshine!

Time tends to stand still as we lean into one another
Imaginings run wild; and emotions overflow even further
Strong hands hold me tenderly in our embrace
Intense brown eyes, into my soul, lovingly gaze 
I tremble; loneliness dispelled in the moment and time
Unwrapped, I’m immersed in your sunshine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/25/2010 9:01:00 PM
Yet another wonderful collaboration with Jimmy :) I can tell that the post office is really happy with all your collaborations ;) it's so wonderful that you keep on coming up with these :)
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:55:00 PM
romantic(: and very sweet. in the beginning of your write, we just know you have so much fun in your loving life. -always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:15:00 PM
i enjoyed this piece very much Audrey. A very compelling write indeed. Very succinct and poignant. --Charles
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:07:00 PM
I can tell that two people are eager to embrace and enfold each other. That is more than evident. You passion is the power behind this piece. How are you both? Nice testament t your passion and longing. Regards and best wishes to you both! Gerard.
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:43:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Audrey. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:27:00 AM
ENJOYED, AUDREY. HAVE A NICE 1,,IRMA
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:42:00 PM
Awesome collaboration, Audrey and Jimmy. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:07:00 PM
I left Jimmy a comment - I'll tell you as well - Great Job!!!! It must be that brown eyes attract. Joe
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:48:00 AM
I love all the imagery. Wonderful write.
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:42:00 AM
Lovely lovely basking poem,Audrey. .enjoyed so much this even. .great couple indeed-Charma
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