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Your Sublime!

Your miles away and this is just child's play baby, come to my bed your lips are sweet cherry red Can't take this flirting stuff anymore you know your the only thing i could ask for the clothes are being removed and by your face I know you approved My heart is racing and, we can't stop embracing can't seem to stop kissing you i can see your eyes are bright blue your voice can make me feel so protected it was unexpected don't know what tommrow will bring but, this might be the real thing your hands were made for mine to hold and now im totally sold kisses on my nose and ears we could stay here for years your sublime! your sublime! until the end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2010 3:09:00 PM
Could be couplets....Passionate write..Welcome to soup...Sara
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Danielle. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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