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Your Sublime!

Your miles away 
and this is just child's play 

baby, come to my bed 
your lips are sweet cherry red 

Can't take this flirting stuff anymore 
you know your the only thing i could ask for 

the clothes are being removed 
and by your face I know you approved 

My heart is racing 
and, we can't stop embracing 

can't seem to stop kissing you 
i can see your eyes are bright blue 

your voice can make me feel so protected 
it was unexpected 

don't know what tommrow will bring 
but, this might be the real thing 

your hands were made for mine to hold 
and now im totally sold

kisses on my nose and ears 
we could stay here for years 

your sublime! 
your sublime! 
until the end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2010 3:09:00 PM
Could be couplets....Passionate write..Welcome to soup...Sara
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Danielle. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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