Your Sub-Zero Eyes

(needs to be edited...this song looks brilliant at first sight already though)

You vanished from my sight
I’m feeling this sorrow…this neglect already
I will decide to move on today or tonight
I will soon be ready
To run the extra mile

Pick on someone your own size…gravity; 
I’m pushing you away from me, 
For I’m already doused in dismay
Your sub-zero eyes are snowed under by 
Sorrow & Happiness
Now, I see the gray of today
We’re lost, soon to be found…
Just don’t drag me down to your own level, 
For my lamentation already weighs a pound – 
Are you an angel or a devil ? ? ?

You vanished from my sight
I’m feeling this sorrow…this neglect already
I will decide to move on today or tonight
I will soon be ready
To run the extra mile
With you for a while
Just smile and be with me
Till the end, we’ll be together in unity

We all want love and the ability 
To take flight tonight! ~ ~
We all have the strength and capacity 
To take fervor-flourishing flight ~
You are a grand, fine light in this world of woe – 
Can you help us fight the good fight?

You vanished from my sight
I’m feeling this sorrow…this neglect already
I will decide to move on today or tonight
I will soon be ready
To run the extra mile
With you for a while
Just smile and be with me
Till the end, we’ll be together in unity

Are you a true friend or an undependable foe?
I’m happy-go-lucky-bound and practically unpredictable…
We’re spinning around and round and round…we must search under the table
To uncover most of the clues to the mysteries
In this life that is full of miseries & reveries

I will soon be ready
To run the extra mile
I will decide to move on today or tonight
Although I’m feeling this sorrow…this neglect...this rejection...jaded for life
You vanished from my sight
I predicted you would by catching a glimpse of your sub-zero eyes . . . 
Reducing me to tears...
Shedding lies...bringing to life the Lord of the Flies...our hope dries . . . 
Now, we're facing our fears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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