Your Song

now to rearrange, or pick and choose 
from what i had, that made up you 
the scattered thoughts inside my head 
"write a song about me" you said 

i found some gems; lyrical gold 
in my snapshot box of things you told 
i strung them together, set them to rhyme 
my jigsaw of poetry in 2/4 time 

this is the stuff that songs are made of 
but i cant sing in tune 
its a shame i have dyslexia 
or i'd try it in accapella 
i know you think its sexier 

the words, i know will make you smile 
i was in love, you in denyal 
those extraordinary nights, sick with perfection 
are mirrored here in my singsong reflection 

that time we laughed so hard we cried 
rolled in the grass, stayed up all night 
dizzy whispers accross the bed 
'write a song about me' you said 

this is the stuff that songs are made of 
but i sing out of key 
this problem makes the tune flop 
sound more r'n'b than hip hop 
so i guess instead of singing 
i'll have to scream your song from rooftops

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/23/2017 7:31:00 PM
look up the Scottish Rite organization to see if they are in your city or town. They offer FREE phenomenal weekly tutoring using the gold standard method of teaching and aiding dyslexic readers (Orton Gillingham method). I have a dyslexic son and I also used to tutor with them. Free if you have a formal diagnoses of dyslexia. (register with your school to get that testing done) You may have to get on their waiting list but is well worth it. Will give you great skills and self confidence galore!
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