Your Smile - Our Last Goodbye

I still remember that day,
Now almost four years ago
Christmas morning at 06H30...

My birthday, a day of celebration – 
One of joy, just like that with one phone call
Everything changed… 

You left me behind,
Tears and disbelief…

Our last conversation, a vivid memory
I remember asking, “Gummie what are you 
getting me for my birthday this year”
All you answered were, “it’s a surprise”

I don’t think that is what you had in mind 
But it happened, unplanned… 
God saw it fit to take you away that day…

It felt like I was dreaming
That I would wake up and you would be in front of me, 
That never happened…

Until today, I will never forget the last time I saw you.
That smile without words, 
A smile that was also our goodbye.

I never made it to your funeral
But I know every Christmas,
You are there, 
still smiling, the difference is 
you are no longer in pain…



Name: Wilma Neels 
Contest: Your "Saddest" Christmas Ever
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Colling Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Omg....I'm so srry bout ur loss....But we gotta keep movin foward....sadly....Thanks for the compliment on my poem...it meant a lot to me Rose
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 8:02 PM
I remember this well written poem of yours ,Wilma. Congrats in the contest. It is truly sad.
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in Constance's "Saddest Christmas Ever"contest. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congrats dear Wilma my friend on your big win in Constance's contest with this emotional and sensitive entry and write.. enjoy another top ten win today with luv... and please send us some South Afrian heat.. it is in the 20's here.. too cold ...
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 4:51 PM
So happy to see this getting well-deserved recognition, Wilma. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Chappell Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:11 PM
im sorry my freind
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November 22, 2010 at 12:58 PM
I am sorry for your loss Wilma. My heart skipped a beat reading this. Memories of your friend will forever be your comfort.
Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Your words are flowing so beautifully Wilma, deep sentimental poetry to a loved one >> James :)
Bark Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 4:17 PM
this is the prettiest...most...solom poem i have ever read...people say my poems are good but yours...im soo sorry for your loss...
Malark Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 2:42 PM
I'm so sorry for your loss. I congradulate you on your poem. I really enjoyed it.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Since this wonderful piece has been on the Hot Poems topping the charts for over a week now I just wanted to come read it again dear Wilma.. such an elegant write for the contest my friend.. again..good luck..happy weekend with luv..
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November 19, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Everything that comes off your fingertips touches me from yes across the pond.. well written poetry...nothing short of great...Love Michael
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November 17, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Dear Wilma, YOU brought Tears to my Eyes with this Heartfelt Write Isee HIS Smile on his Face and in HIS Eyes YOU Write so Vividly I also Congratulate YOU on YOUR POEM "Vista of POETRY" In the Winners Circle LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 12:42 AM
this broke my geart, wilma... such a tender, gut-wrenching write.. will surely be a winner in the contest! much luck and thanks for sending me a warm note.. warmest, nette
M V Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Is is very touching write,Wilma.A desrving piece for the contest.Good luck
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Oh, yes, I knew this was true, Wilma. because you told me about this guy in another poem when you wrote of him. So sad! Get to BED now. haha. and me too, my back is killing me!
Ruebel Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Wilma, Thank you for you kind words, This is a beautiful write, I am so sorry you lost him. As Always, Shar
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Gosh, this is truly sad. IS this that really good friend of yours then. SO prophetic what he said about the surprise for you. It's so good how you worked this into the saddest Christmas theme. I can't think of a thing, so I'm gonna make one up now. LUv , andrea
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November 16, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Wilma, this is a powerful write...the sadness is overwhelming and your stanzas are clearly flowing ! Very good...I enjoyed reading this write ! much love, james
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November 16, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Hello Wilma, What a sad but absolutely beautiful tribute to your Grand-mother. How lucky you were to have her in your life. I never knew mine. I am sure she watches over you. As Always, Shar
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November 16, 2010 at 12:32 PM
This is a very sad write Wilma, it reads like true to life, so I will go ahead and offer my condolences. Look for a 'brighter day'. Thanks for your walk by me, to leave your much appreciated comments. God bless. Joy (Jew)
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November 16, 2010 at 7:38 AM
is this real Wilma, sure is sad.. gave me chills just reading about the phone call, sad,, the tears are so heart breaking. Enjoyed your read and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
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November 16, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Darn, life is a rough game, and we poor mortals are its sports. Great write, Wilma, all the best!
Knop Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Hey Wilma, what a sad story!!! But I enjoyed the read this early afternoon! Al die beste!...Gert :)
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