Gershon Wolf Poet Alliteration

Your Slender Frame

Vegetation verdant midst vapor-laden valley
  Misty cloud-mountains mask mansions' mirage
Time trembles, delicate, teasing tender tree-shoots
  Feathered flyers beat fast, beat furious, beat breathless  

Oceans ooze overhead, omnipotent orchestration, oh so
  Sonorous, solemn spectacle suggesting celebrations
Both beatific and bemused, beckoning bewitching
  Doe-eyed denizens of languid, listless deltas ---
  
When my eyes alight upon your slender frame
  Your swanlike grace freezing me
     ~ In the orb of your luxuriant gaze

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Alkas Poetry April 27, 2019 at 2:54 AM Hello poet, wonderful cennario full of brilliant metaphors where you made a remarkable poetry; Poetry is that ... the subtle impression of the poet for things that his inner gaze sees ... congratulations, salute, alkas Gershon Wolf April 27, 2019 at 9:30 PM Alkas, appreciate every kind word you've written and all of your encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon

M. L. Kiser April 26, 2019 at 4:34 PM Wow, Gershon! Some brilliant imagery in here; great metaphor and it rings out from the page. Well done! Gershon Wolf April 27, 2019 at 9:29 PM O.K. Half of what you've written would be more than enough for me. Thank you so much. ~ gw

Heidi Sands April 26, 2019 at 8:18 AM Wow, amazing write with all those words. Well done :) Gershon Wolf April 27, 2019 at 9:28 PM Thank you so much for the view and the viewpoint, Heidi! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner April 25, 2019 at 10:51 PM So full of fatty fabulous freshness! Fantastic:) Gershon Wolf April 27, 2019 at 9:28 PM Creamy, caressing comment, Michelle! :) gw