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Your Slender Frame

Vegetation verdant midst vapor-laden valley Misty cloud-mountains mask mansions' mirage Time trembles, delicate, teasing tender tree-shoots Feathered flyers beat fast, beat furious, beat breathless Oceans ooze overhead, omnipotent orchestration, oh so Sonorous, solemn spectacle suggesting celebrations Both beatific and bemused, beckoning bewitching Doe-eyed denizens of languid, listless deltas --- When my eyes alight upon your slender frame Your swanlike grace freezing me ~ In the orb of your luxuriant gaze

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Date: 4/27/2019 2:54:00 AM
Hello poet, wonderful cennario full of brilliant metaphors where you made a remarkable poetry; Poetry is that ... the subtle impression of the poet for things that his inner gaze sees ... congratulations, salute, alkas
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2019 9:30:00 PM
Alkas, appreciate every kind word you've written and all of your encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/26/2019 4:34:00 PM
Wow, Gershon! Some brilliant imagery in here; great metaphor and it rings out from the page. Well done!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2019 9:29:00 PM
O.K. Half of what you've written would be more than enough for me. Thank you so much. ~ gw
Date: 4/26/2019 8:18:00 AM
Wow, amazing write with all those words. Well done :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2019 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for the view and the viewpoint, Heidi! :) gw
Date: 4/25/2019 10:51:00 PM
So full of fatty fabulous freshness! Fantastic:)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2019 9:28:00 PM
Creamy, caressing comment, Michelle! :) gw

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