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Touch with your tongue, touch with your heart worded dewdrops speak plain.. not beating my chest., or tempting a soul nor giving it away, except maybe, just this once.. again. Think you saw something that reminded you.. w' those same eyes that used to see through, oh used to see right through... Would you have heard me, If you didn't have keen ears? So very, very keen.. searching a single note from afar, though near enough to hear my plea. No, more, no less, or maybe all of those... waxing & waning in a dream's moonlit sky Frankie said- "whatever gets you through the night." lest you wonder, at motes floating past your eye.. it's all yours, your turn to shine.

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Date: 9/23/2023 7:55:00 AM
My good friend, a very fine and keenly crafted poem. Its depths to be explored with an intellectual curiosity. A fine gem, A fav for me. God bless yo.
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Date: 9/21/2023 8:57:00 PM
Romantic or spiritual, "Touch with your tongue, touch with your heart worded dewdrops speak plain. it's all yours, your turn to shine." Enjoyed every word.
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Date: 9/21/2023 8:02:00 AM
Great writing. Loved your timely phases. Well writ.
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Date: 9/19/2023 10:31:00 AM
Very nice Richard. I like the line..waxing and waning in a dream's moonlit sky. I hope your day is going well :)
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:59:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Love it. God bless you, my friend. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 9/17/2023 6:47:00 AM
mots floating past the eye!!!! I get that and sometimes wonder if I'm seeing angels.
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Date: 9/16/2023 8:23:00 PM
nice strong first stanza to draw the reader in... i can hear you keen ears or not, your voice is strong through words, though it always has been... good write my friend! hugs
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