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Your presence Whenever I’m in your presence It’s like I’m left stunned for hours Because you have such elegance Your eyes their like sun flowers I can’t take my eyes off your face Whenever I’m in your presence You send me into outer space Because you have this essence Whenever I’m in your presence Now I always feel so apprehensive Trying hard to finish this sentence You have a look that’s so surjestive It’s not like I’m in a state of absence It would be quite hard not be aware You know when I’m in your presence And you have that seductive stare Another lovey dovy poem written for you Dawn baby Like one of a kind if you were mine ect capturing the mment of yu and I Again what else can I say Im very attracted to you I lve you babe with all my heart ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Love always Davidxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx WRITTEN BY David Scott jly 2014

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Date: 2/6/2016 8:06:00 AM
Hope to see you again this year on the soup. LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:36:00 AM
Wow a lovely lively hearty love poem in great rhyming n emotion showin the smitten feelings swell. Nice to share live poems, fun to read. If dawn is a poetess she ought to really appreciate this. Great to read frm u again.
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Date: 12/25/2015 11:10:00 PM
David, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:02:00 PM
Hi David, a love poem. I'm happy for you and Dawn... LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2015 1:46:00 PM
This is a lovely poem David, is Dawn your significant other? A joy to read. SKAT
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