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Your presence

Whenever I’m in your presence
It’s like I’m left stunned for hours
Because you have such elegance
Your eyes their like sun flowers

I can’t take my eyes off your face
Whenever I’m in your presence
You send me into outer space
Because you have this essence

Whenever I’m in your presence
Now I always feel so apprehensive
Trying hard to finish this sentence
You have a look that’s so surjestive

It’s not like I’m in a state of absence
It would be quite hard not be aware
You know when I’m in your presence
And you have that seductive stare







Another lovey dovy poem written for you Dawn baby 
Like one of a kind if you were mine ect capturing the mment of yu and I
Again what else can I say Im very attracted to you I lve you babe with all my heart
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Love always Davidxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx WRITTEN BY David Scott jly 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/6/2016 8:06:00 AM
Hope to see you again this year on the soup. LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:36:00 AM
Wow a lovely lively hearty love poem in great rhyming n emotion showin the smitten feelings swell. Nice to share live poems, fun to read. If dawn is a poetess she ought to really appreciate this. Great to read frm u again.
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Date: 12/25/2015 11:10:00 PM
David, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:02:00 PM
Hi David, a love poem. I'm happy for you and Dawn... LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2015 1:46:00 PM
This is a lovely poem David, is Dawn your significant other? A joy to read. SKAT
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